Enjoying life in twilight

Read this if you want to watch an MC that wants to be free get progressively brainwashed by a mate bond.

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The story overall is worthwhile reading. It does have it downs but still a decent read.Grammatically it is high above normal Webnovel standards but the sentence structure could use a little improvement.The story is pretty straightforward, die-get wishes-meet mate-trouble comes-deal with it easily-happily ever after. Predictable but still somewhat enjoyable.The characters feel a little empty, especially the OC's. Could've stretched the story a little bit and fleshed out some of the wolf pack characters and perhaps have more interactions with the shapeshifters. The MC does have the full wolf form after all. Gave one of the enemies a full chapter background only to have him killed pretty much instantly.The world is Twilight. Not much there to explain, but the travelling is done bad. At one point it the story the MC and his friend apparently travel from Forks, WA to the Volturi headquarters by running in a couple hours. That means they traveled across the US, the Atlantic ocean and half of Europe by running. So either the writer didn't do his homework or just made a mistake I don't know, but it did make the story feel sloppy.

It’s good for passing time pretty fast paced but overal decent

character is garbage, absolutely unlikable unnecessarily detailed af and the details are useless i cant go a single second reading without cringing if i could given negative stars i would i understand that a fanfiction is supposed to be like a dream like or scenario for the author to share to others but at least try to make it good

Une fic merdique comme tant 'autre sur le thème de twilight Franchement un vampire paradis d'origine aurait sûrement eu des enfants vampire parfait et pq elle est pas curieuse des sorciere qu'il évoque C un menteur et un chien le mc on le vois au début de l'histoire Il déteste les cullens il y a aucune raison ,il le dit lui-même

First off writing is good not perfect but most on here usually aren’t. Updates could be better but now slow enough to lose interest. Story development…. is developing lol… The character design is cool I see a lot of people upset that he’s in a mate bond and think he’s changing but in reality he’s changed his mate just as much. It’s preferable to just say it’s not your cup of tea. Plus the MCs character didn’t really change it’s a difference between caring for your significant other and simping for a woman. Anyway I’m enjoying the story so far and look forward to more updates.

I enjoyed a few chapters but then it just went so downhill. It's disappointing honestly.

Decent book.. a bit anti climactic and more so rushed, especially at the ending.. nevertheless, a decent book and a decent read.. plot progression was stable.. Decent book

It was alright. Didn’t develop the character properly or the story.

it was a good book.it was mediocre at Best, but it was good.it's a good way to waste your time, and honestly, its cliche and simplicity were refreshing ✨️ soooyhI love it. ❤️ Great work, author

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i give this an average score. this is not a story i would usually read. it was entertaining, but probably not a book/fanfiction i would read a second time. the writing had many flaws, and many words missing in the sentences. the story was very cringe to be honest and it was going at a very fast pace, and don't have alot of depth.but it was still entertaining too say the least 3 stars.

Hm i liked the book it was fun . . .

why don't you continue this with the daughter as protag that would be 😎👍

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short story but it's good and enjoyable to read. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

a beautiful story , short yes but wholesome

A good story to pass time. The plot is simple and enjoyable with a touch of slice of life and bloody battles and good side characters that give us the readers good laughs. I strongly recommend it for anyone who likes the twilight verse.

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