Cyclxne
A simulated apocalypse with characters with basic designs but different characteristics to them makes the reader want to read more of the story. While the world building might seem too similar to other novels, it is a common thing to add game elements and such to a setting like this. Since it's still too early in the novel to make a comment on the main character, I'm still interested in how he will develop throughout the story. I'm really hyped to read more of this story, looking forward to the new updates ! Also, I love the cover, it really attracts the reader's attention.
So, firstly, just so you know, author, I rarely give full 5-star reviews lol. If you look at the last few reviews I've done, I'm sure that you will notice that none of them have received full marks so that alone should tell you the entire story. Synopsis: Very nearly done. It's well organized, precise, and tells what the story is about in full glory. No complaints there. Story Development: Let's just say it assassinated all doubts I had going in~. The character is already a killer and while I was hoping you didn't follow the cliche route with an assassin that seemingly enjoys killing, it was still well done. Character Design: Your descriptions were fluid and I had no issue trying to picture how your character looked. Some readers rather to imagine their characters, however, so it's also a matter of preference. But well done. Finally, I can see why you're #1 in WPC #234 so far. This is coming from the current 5th place participant *cough*. I wish you all the best and keep up the good work. You're sure to win if you continue like this!
As the creator of the character of Ragnar, I have had somewhat (albeit, not at all that large compared to Cyclxne) of a hand in the creation of this book - but I only chose to do so because of how much potential I saw in it day one. The writing is awesome, the premise is so good I wish I'd come up with it myself. Definitely something I would buy in a bookstore.