A very promising start. The first chapters were a bit difficult to read, but with each subsequent one you get to know the characters and their surroundings better. I will also note the interaction between the Kellen and Ella, right up to the goosebumps, so sensual. I love the romantic component in books. Author, good luck in writing - it's hard work, but you're doing great!
Too much Detailing! which kinda ruins the flow here and there (I am still doing these mistakes, so I know it's hard to change😅) But that only proves that this novel is extremely ambitious. The story, worldbuilding, character appearences has so much thought and effort put into it, which allows the grandeur scope of the story to be visible in every passage of the story. And it also seems the author is working hard on rewrites... so good luck with that😇. Overall, this story has a great potential to be a great epic tale.