Shameless 5 stars review from me, I only read the first chapter and it feels too rush. Take it slow, explain the world building first and watch out for diction (ex: height 175 cm, not tall 175 cm) also the grammar or the structure of your sentence, maybe you need an editor. . Tetap semangat dan keep improving yourself to be a better writer. Podho wong Indo-ne tak dukung tok pokok๐
Harems=bad.
Nice i love it. It brings a lot of Indonesian monster type of Undead. Keep going your good work author. I will always support you. Love from kudus
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Good novel 10/10.
Great novel 10/10.
As others have said, it is kind of a discount Sword Art Online. I only got to chapter 9 by this point, but I am going to drop it. The part I dislike the most, is that the game mechanics are hardly touched in the beginning. That is a big reason I like video game novels, there is a power standard and quantifiable growth, but these stats seem arbitrary. Movement speed is the biggest flag: he has 7 movement speed and run. (Successfully) from a monster with 20 movement speed. There is no indication that the monster has to make a detour around trees or something, but he out-runs it just fine.
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Great story and great MC character anyway thank you for novel.
Good start. Started reading, hoping for a nice journey forward. Good luck Author on your journey to make a nice great world. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
This novel are truly mess innocent girl being raped where else mc enjoying his sleep and its not enough here author give a tragic past to sweetsugar guild leader men if you have to write thing like this at least give a warning Truly man, don't know what. Are thing thinking writing all this mess๐คฌ
Really get book the creator of the story really listens to his readers which is awesome. Because of this the character development is always on point and he does a great job keeping the readers happy.
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Author you should be careful when choosing cover because sometimes readers come and read it because of the cover, it also sometimes resembles the character. And the mc, he should be mature than others like jin woo ur cover since he suffered early from both his parents. I know the mc got trauma but why make mc like super naive (yeah exaggerated) in the begging? It will be better if he was clever and smart. Ps: dont take this seriously as i am only expressing my thoughts about the story. Continue your gud work author!