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TL:DR — It's a good story. You will not regret reading it. I think the premise of the story is good, and the author has put in a lot of effort into the character building, relationships, and world building. Grammar and English need improvement, but it is still bearable when compared to many other Originals on this site. And considering the fact that it is already at around a 100 chapters, and the author has made consistent releases since the beginning, I am sure this story will go places. In my opinion, it is a good read and you will not regret reading it.

I am a big fan of female novels. Found this by my fav author recommendation. Love it. Can we have a regular update author? You did a wonderful job in the story, so you do keep up the story .. Have a high expectation

A gem guys❣💕💞😍😘🥰...a real gem.❣💕💞😍😘🥰 DO give it a chance to shine. ❣💕💞😍😘🥰you wont regret it.❣💕💞😍😘🥰Thnks for the story author.I love it.❣💕💞😍😘🥰

All I can say is that , I will make you my " MUSE " ! Guys highly recommended ! I'll tell my friends about your story ! God bless you author!!!!!!!!

So reading through the story, I really liked the modern world setting and the character descriptions. However, I would recommend the author to use grammar editor softwares to edit out any casual errors. Also, as a heads up, I would advise the author to plan out each chapter as it maintains a flow in the story. Rest all is good and this story is good for people looking for a positive setting.

Nice story..give it try guys...😍 It may be your cup... Love the story and the character... Give support to the new authors.😘😘😘 Thanks for the wonderful story

Though I don't read female lead novels usually. This one has a catch to it. I've read a little of it... and will continue.. Hoping that the author continues the quality.

The Story was OK...I guess...felt sad reading the too tragedic pasts of the ML & FL....

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I really enjoyed the complex characters and their very in-depth history that the writer provides. This novel contains different parts and the first part is completely free to read which really lets you get into this world before you have to invest in the novel. The first part is really just the prologue and the story really takes off after that. I recommend everyone who enjoys strong female leads to give this novel a shot you really don't have anything to loose since free chapters give you a complete story that has a defined beginning, middle, and end.

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Strong female lead? Check? Mysterious male lead who truly loves her? Check. Touch of romance and mystery? Double check! A well written and thoughtfully developed story with gripping characters. The grammar is great, scenarios are well written and honestly, I can't find a flaw. Give it a shot!