Embodiment of lust.

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It did had a good start but I feel like it's becoming somewhat cliche with just about 30 chapters in. Also the grammar is getting in my way of fully immersing in story.

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Nice i like the plot and the scenes it has a good flow keep it up and reading this story also feels nice i started reading the 1st 10 chapter and man i am inpressed with the story line just the updates are kinda lousy

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Thank you for the chapter, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story Thank you for the chapter, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story

Muy buena novela.............................................................................................................................................

The story is really good and the foreshadowing of more powerful entities or higher realms makes it even more exciting. Give it a try then you will realise how good it is. Thanks Author for the superb story

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Honestly it could use some work with the character interactions..... It feels like it's just going back and forth with the MC while the other characters have been sidelined. It still too early to be heavily criticized as the story is still pretty interesting... 🍻 Here's hoping to more chapters _P.S_ I'm kinda hooked on it😌😌

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