Embodiment of lust.

I love the world development, and mc even have self- made system. It has a very good story arc too. Having an mc struggling to control his power has its own charm, it also gives room for more development. I love it.

Es de mis primeras ""fan" que leo y la verdad me gusto bastante, tiene una trama simple pero se desarrolla de manera interesante, los personajes son creíbles y aun mas sus relaciones con el MC

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It's amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story It's amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story It's amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story It's amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story

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Remarkable, respected writer, I am waiting for the continuation of the story Remarkable, respected writer, I am waiting for the continuation of the story Remarkable, respected writer, I am waiting for the continuation of the story Remarkable, respected writer, I am waiting for the continuation of the story

-It was really good, nothing too serious but it's not a comedy center either. -I don't know if I should point out the grammar errors. I feel like I am being annoying as I usually don't care about this stuff, so please let me know if I should. -If you author starts to use Grammaly the novel wouldn't have any grammatical errors. The errors aren't anything big, just some things that we forget when tired or angry. -I don't know if it's an inside joke that I am not aware but 'Ofcourse' is separated from all I know -There wasn't anything that truly excited me, no climax... things just happen, no impacting scene, cool scene, sad scene. It's nice but it will get boring this way, like a pass time. ( this is just my opinion, I know your history is for self-fulfillment so you can just ignore this if you want as it would affect the writing as a whole)

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shameless review the plot is nice mc is haughty as the title need some inprovement but i like it so do your best ..........................

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bro in ringdom chapter it only opens using the mobile application while I use the pc 😥

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