Egoist: Variant

In a world where the very essence of one's being can manifest as power, granting incredible and miraculous abilities to those who succeed. Young Kris tries to make a name for himself as the greatest Egoist in the world. Will he succeed? or Will he fall and fail, forgotten in the annals of history? [Temporary Hiatus] Chapters are anywhere from 800-1000 words Also please leave a comment! I want to know how I'm doing so far. Do I explain some things more? less? Too fast paced? stuff like that.