EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY

I've just started reading this book and I have to say it drew me in immediately. The story starts off with a bang and doesn't let up so I am very excited to continue reading. My only feedback to the author would be to proofread a little more carefully as there were some typos and grammatical errors.

Interesting plotline. The synopsis is well written and really attractive. Good job Author

I really liked this novel's unique plot and would recommend it to everyone. it is definitely a five star for me.

Loved it with an interesting plot and characters all are quite unique . I am already hooked ,so well done author and hope you continue to write more.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Hello Author,The book is super intriguing. I am enjoying reading it! Anyways, my minor criticisms were, the name of the story is kind of less catchy or interesting, and another thing was that I cannot exactly tell what your characters look like.

The story is a very catching one. I really love it, the first chapter caught me already, it literally had me drowning in my feelings for Eden. I don't have to repeat what others have said already but all I can say is that you novel is definitely worth it. You are a novel slayer❤️.

Great writing for a great story, such an interesting characters and plot that make you unable to stop reading

Pretty good I like the novel and it was pretty intertsting. Quality was good, dialogue is interesting, characters are interesting

10/10 would recommend keep up the good work author

I really like this story. I enjoy the fact that he knows he has a system in the beginning instead of just then figuring it out. The pacing is also pretty good! Keep it up!

One thing I can say about this story is that it is one of the most unique stories I have read so far. Not many stories are designed like this anymore. I liked how things are explained making it easy to understand while reading the story. Not being a fan of supernatural stories, I found myself dragged into continuously reading the chapters! <3 You are doing amazing!

This novel background, character and storyline is just wow. Really loved reading this novel. I can see this novel had very much potential.[img=update]

Well, this book has everything you wish for. Rebirth, System, Magic, Supernaturals, and a totally interesting and mindblowing world. From the moment you start reading, you would want to know more. I totally loved it. The writing is good that you can get immersed in the plot. Cool story, writer!

I could say that the book is worth to add into the library. While commuting on train, reading this book will help you pass the time. The chapter already a lot so it could be finished in one go. The setting of this book is mainstream, which also mean the genre is much more popular in this platform. The writing style is easy to read and understand. So there won't be problem. As the overall review, this book is very fun to read and enjoy. I hope it grow more unique from other similiar book.

Story is quite fantastic. I have only read 3 chapters but so far I have enjoyed it. I will try to read it when I'll have time. Good work. The character development, story pace everything looked good.,👏👏👏

I am really enjoying this story so far. The start of the story is gripping. We don't know what happened to the Emperor Eden and why he was imprisoned and being tortured. I am excited to see more of the first timeline as well as how Eden Locker will become the best magus. The pacing of the story and the world building is good, There are some grammar errors but not so glaring as to detract from the story. Keep up the good work author-nim!

Good read. I read a few chapters of it so far and I can definitely say that it's not a bad read. The main character is interesting and the update time seems pretty good, so I look forward to it.

Love the writing style and darkness really gets me immersed.

The story is so interesting and I was so engrossed in it! It definitely has a lot of potential. But as most people have said, there are some minor mistakes in grammar. But overall the story was really great!

I never liked system books but this is a great read. The story structure and world building is so captivating. I recommend this book.