EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY

This story has great world building, a lot of characters, and a lot of character development. If you're looking for a story that has a rich story line, this one's for you!

The pacing is amazing. The writing is good. The characters and world built by the author are well done. If you like system novels, then this story is a must to check out.

Loved it. It has good writing quality and plot which will hook the reader. Well done author waiting for more chapters.

What a banger story! Highly recommended! The novel itself starts good and makes you wonder where the story will take you! Good story Author!

The book is very intriguing, I will confidently say. The synopsis is very concise itself, every chap is a new experience. I just love how the chaps engages the readers, keeps the readers yearning for the next chap. Please keep it up author.

I'm speechless.Everything in it, despite the writing with some issues here and there, is denoting potential.I love it, and will continue reading.Thanks for the good work, author!!!

masterpiece 😍😍 the synopsis itself is alurring and i can't wait to start reading the chapters already😏❤️❤️

Wow!!! I like your story. I feel like i am watching an anime while reading this. It's fun to read your story ❤️❤️❤️ i do love reading and watching about quests

It surprised me, when I read the word magus in the synopsis I was already starting to loose interest but the first chapter god me hooked, I don't know what to expect at the letter characters but I hope it's just as good

I enjoy the story so far even if it is not my type of genre but I enjoy it, Kudos to you Author.

I'm still on the early chapters but I have this feeling that I'll probably be reading this till the end😁

The story moves along at a good steady pace and it goes stand out in a sea of generic action stories. Overall I’m enjoying this book. Will definitely keep reading.

The novel is good way different from cliche novels that are filled in webnovel. The execution and writing are also great excluding some typos. I like the personality of the MC Eden since his personality is refreshing since it's different from the overall arrogant mc's present

this book is super🥰🥰 everybody will love to read it

Wow, what an interesting beginning. I don't usually read this kind of stories cause I hardly understand them but yours was good I can tell, everything was in place, I love the action. let's see what Eden's fate would be. Nice work author.

This story is fun to read! Very interesting and the plot is engaging, the writing is good too^^ Keep up the updates coming author!👏👏

The Opening chapter was a massive hit! It gave me chills like when I first saw Pirate D execution. Hahaha, I hope you know what I mean. Anyway, that first chapter shows how strong the MC will be. It will be interesting to know how he will reach that level. Another thing that I want to say about this book is about the World background or the world setting of the story. The more I read the book, the more I visualize the world in the story as similar to the world setting of Henry Potter... Hahaha. I'm sure you all know who that is, right? Overall, the book is interesting. I will probably write a review again after reading more chapters.

I love this! that was totally a very great read. every chapters had a very wonderful and detailed explanation. the writing itself was a masterpiece. plus I noticed the synopsis upon going back to the back it has a very interesting idea for the readers as well. Great Job Author

It's an interesting fantasy story to read, but there are a few sentence uses that are not quite right. The story flows, but there are some parts that are a bit confusing. Keep up the good work author!

Generally, the storyline is intriguing, and the characters are perfect. The author controlled the pace of the story and all elements so well that it enabled readers to have a great read. This is an exciting book that fans of fantasy fiction would undoubtedly enjoy. It is a gripping adventure with great characters and an exciting plot. Good job, author. [img=recommend]