This is wonderful, I'm totally in love with this book... The plot is interesting, the style of writing is more than unique, and I'm totally hooked by the characters... The book is already in my library, and I can't stop myself from being addicted [img=update]
From what I read, I can say the story is quite engaging and has a lot of potentialal. Both the characters and the world are nicely build and leave a lot of room for growth. I find the main lead quite intriguing and actually can't wait to see more of her.
Damn, I love this book man. Writing is perfect and the story pace is going good. I love MC's underhand methods to win the fight. That skill is really awesome. Keep up your good work, Author.
A very interesting story and an unusual system. The history is written very interestingly, and the fact that everyone in the world has a system is very exciting.
Everything is really thought out and it's very easy and nice to read. I loved reading it and I love the way you showed the point of views of the characters! Keep up the good work!
Reading it was very interesting, the MC for me personally doesn't feel like it, but that's because I am weird. I see if many people like it and no complaint about that. All the other characters felt real, somewhat what a human would do with just very few things that I would put into consideration. Overall I feel like this one is for all fans of the genre, it's nicely paced, well-written piece of literature in which anyone can find himself. Praise the author!
This story is really great. I have only read the first chapter but it really grabs your attention. It throws you right in but it's done right. It makes me feel like my story's are to slow paced hahah. I really enjoy this hopefully I can write something like this some day. đ
bro this is awesome I m adding you to my library. the story and characters are alive and free. i cant wait to see Whats in store as write more
This has so far been one of the very few stories with a system that I have liked. The main character is likable - not too good morally speaking, calculating, but gives off the vibe of actually having a warm heart. I will probably come back to this story later for the sake of knowing what happens to the MC.
First of all, when you see this book for the first time what you see is the cover and I should say that it's awsone, when you add it with the synopsis you obtained already a good trapp for a reader like me so I had to jump into that novel and I wasn't disapointed at all ! If your into fantasy + female MC + romance + games elements you should absolutely don't miss this hidden gem ! 5 stars here !
The story is great!!! I just read the first though put GREAT!!! The plot is very interesting for me. Reading the first sentence and the next is exactly my reaction. (Huh? Wutt??? We're dyin'?) Reading the stat. (Oh... we playin' games now?) ... '-') just kidding. Anyway, great job!!! Please keep it up! Looking forward for more.
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This a great story!!! I was engrossed while reading the story and the storyline is so unique! I hope the author will update more since I'm one of your new readers now!
It's so good!!! I love the smooth flow of the story and the RPG style. Fascinating plot and engaging with relatable characters. The author put the right amount of mystery to every chapter. A must add to my collection. I'm going to support this novel and continue reading â¤
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The author is so talented!! This is a fun novel and it seems like the MC is up for one hell of an adventuređ The writing is so good which makes me a bit envious𤣠I love female Generalsđ I repeatđ
What the heck, this so amazing. You really make something amazing. I like how you gives the plot and the way you describe it. Can't wait to see the other ;)
Thoroughly enjoyed this. It's not something I would normally read. Being the old geezer that I am. I still found myself enamoured with the story and I can't wait for the next chapter! Also I think we can all agree; the cover art is amazing. Have some stars!!
Right off the bat, I was hooked into the world the author had created. It was a splendid read with just the right pacing to keep you wanting more. I love the ample use of dialogues which shows me a lot about the characters themselves and how they interact with each other. The paragraphs are well polished and I can see this story being a hit with teens and young adults. There are however slight grammar and spelling mistakes that could easily be fixed with a grammar software or by proofreading. Overall, it's an intriguing story with some gaming elements introduced.
Okay, this is GREAT I love the concept, the flow of the story, the protagonist, EVERYTHING! Gosh, I wish I was as talented as you in writing.