Dungeon of Pride, Laplace

a huge disappointment 😞 oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

One day I longed to read a novel with a non-human mc so I could avoid reading about emotions that are typically displayed by human mc’s (compassion, kindness, etc. etc.) so, like many others before me, I enabled the filter for non human mc’s and browsed. Found this peculiar novel and was immediately intrigued by the concept and world, so much so that I reached chapter 90 in a few days even with my limited time, and just like any other novel out there - there were ups and downs but nothing bad enough to cause a drop. It was however around chapter 90 that the mc started displaying and explaining behaviors I would not expect from a non human mc and later on admitted that he is still human inside regardless of all the changes he has experienced and that’s when I found out I just wasted my time on this novel, because this was never properly explained by the author beforehand. The mc was simply never in a position to show his humanity before, it took nearly 100 chapters for him to do so. Tldr——— the non human mc tag is true in appearance but false in spirit

the title of the story is so fake man ....the demon lord of pride without pride lol 😂😂

At first I liked it a lot, but then I began to be a little disappointed with the development of the character. Perhaps the author wants to create a new concept of "demon" because MC is nothing like one, he is not so cunning or so ruthless. Also, the description of Irene's physical features whenever she appears is annoying. Despite this, I recognise that the author had a good initial idea.

I reached around level 250, and felt that it got too annoying. Repeated interactions with beings so far above his power level for no reason that act like overgrown children with a shotgun just makes me annoyed. That on top of the writing just turns me off to this book.

at the beginning it was very good, seriously, I was really enjoying it, but then irene appeared and everything was very embarrassing for me, she talks all the time about her beauty, the protagonist seems to have changed out of nowhere and became a ''good person'' different from when it was in the beginning. the saddest thing for me about this work is that he DOES NOT SEEM TO BE PRIDE, he is NOTHING proud that he shouldn't be, the author should watch 'nanatsu no taizai' and learn from escanor.

A different story, far from the usual, I like the dungeon system, I highly recommend it. The good thing about the story is that the author is not in a hurry to advance the MC in a short time. I think an MC should gain strength over time, not in recurring problems.

I do think that the topic is really good however, there is to much useless information in every single chapter. All the time something was stated shortly at the beginning but the author feels the need to explain that statement in more depth by using two or more paragraphs. Due to that so little happens in each chapter. I really like the story however i think the author should stop giving out so much useless info in a single chapter or increase the lenghts of the chapters

the book is alright the story so far is nice but the fight scene are bad and I mean bad . it like the writer forgets the stuff he mentions in the previous chapters. and most stuff that feels important and brushed of and mentioned so little

This book is very good, I recommend those of you who like books with this kind of genre to read it, I guarantee you will like it. I hope you all will like this book.

Not saying the novel is bad or anything, this's something apart, but this novel made ponder once again why in these instances where theres the good and bad side the MC is reborn in the demon side like a edgy anti-hero? I find myself coming across a lot of this for some reason, I once thought it was because a good MC was the common trend, but like I said recently I'm thinking it's the reverse.

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Couldn't suggest this novel to anybody more then i already can, whether its a new novel reader or an old one this book just gets you hooked, from the story to its character development its all simply too good to be true, the only thing that i dont like (personal opinion on like every novel) is that the chapters are just a little too short on the word count for how addicting it is to read it

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A good dungeon creation novel. Writing quality(5star) Updating stability(3star) Story development(5) Character design(4) World Background(4)

author plz look at dis review...............................................................................................................

HONESTLY SPEAKING, This is one the best novels ive ever read, not only is world building, but the power system, characters, but overall plot as well ,really isnt difficult to understand and very enjoyable. Highly recommend this to any system loving readers and writers

one of my favourite. The start would seem weak and unplanned which i know but the author managed it well and the quality went highet as it went. Thank God the mc didnt become a nice demon to humans trope after the arc around 500.