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To all the readers out there, care to give this novel a try! Dreams do exists, and the mystery behind it has yet to be seen. I really love the concept of your work. It involves (or may involves) scientific events paired with the current reality. Although Ive only read few chapters of your book, I am already amazed on how well you have come up until now. The only advice that I can give you are you can an alternate word or synonym at some nouns that you use. A great example this is changing the word "Dream" into a "Revery" or astral something. You can even link a metaphor which will make the story sail smoother. Overall, I think this book is amazing!
Author of godly abomination returns here✋ I'm giving this novel five stars. First it has a wonderful pov story telling style which carries the readers along. secondly the story is unique unlike what you mostly see on wn. Thirdly the author improves on her grammar as the story progresses which shows the hardwork she's putting in to make her writing better. You all should give this a chance. Highly recommended, it's worth your time.
Firstly, good job to the author! I've only read the first few chapters of the book but I love the idea of the entire story. Despite a bit of grammar mistakes, the emotions and thrill was still portrayed wonderfully. I also love the current book cover as it speaks everything the book is for. Just keep updating, and never give up! All the best~
Noticed grammatical mistakes, but not big enough to turn me off. The cover picture is beautiful. It gives off a mysterious feeling that suits the title. The premise of the story is good, but I believe that author can do better if there is a balance between showing and telling, and consistency in tenses. Goodluck!
Engaging from the start, the story starts off strong with a glimpse regarding dreams and the power of it, to the point where it becomes very clear that dreams are what makes the story in the first place. The author knows how to make the reader engaged by having scenes that require attention, as well as meaningful narration from the narrator. Although there's slight mistakes in grammar, such as "i" used for the narration instead of the usual "I", it does not heavily affect how the story is told. Bonus points on having a protagonist who is different from others. Philip has a clear ambition on his actions, and his need to fill that role as a hero. Keep on writing author. So far so good!
Great dialogue and transition. I love how you portray the scenes and i love the concept of your story. Personally, I experienced something like this sometimes. One time i dream about me and my crush talking lmao well fragments of it, then the next morning it really did happen well he approach me first haha. Well i really like your story it got me hooked on the first chapter just thinking of dreaming about future scenarios is exciting and i like how he does his best to solve any problem. Overall a great read , Wating for more. [img=update] [img=recommend]
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The concept of the story got me actually interested in reading this. Though, I must say I am not a fan of reality-fictions. But, reading the synopsis I gave it a chance. Gladly, it did not disappoint me at all. It was worth my time. I truly enjoyed reading the story. Though, I have few concerns such as the congestion of the paragraphs that may be too dragging for other readers. Lastly, I recommend Grammarly or any application that may help you with minor grammar errors. In totality, I will still give this a 10/10 despite of minor issues. Not all authors could pull off such concept. Keep it up author-nim! More Chapters.