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Dream turns into Reality

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kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3kuhaku_sora

To all the readers out there, care to give this novel a try! Dreams do exists, and the mystery behind it has yet to be seen. I really love the concept of your work. It involves (or may involves) scientific events paired with the current reality. Although Ive only read few chapters of your book, I am already amazed on how well you have come up until now. The only advice that I can give you are you can an alternate word or synonym at some nouns that you use. A great example this is changing the word "Dream" into a "Revery" or astral something. You can even link a metaphor which will make the story sail smoother. Overall, I think this book is amazing!

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TimVic
TimVicLv14TimVic

Author of godly abomination returns here✋ I'm giving this novel five stars. First it has a wonderful pov story telling style which carries the readers along. secondly the story is unique unlike what you mostly see on wn. Thirdly the author improves on her grammar as the story progresses which shows the hardwork she's putting in to make her writing better. You all should give this a chance. Highly recommended, it's worth your time.

YuuRin
YuuRinLv6YuuRin

It piqued my interest as soon as i read the title of the novel. It is different from the ones i usually read, but i will definitely read and wait for the future updates on this novel because it is really good.

Zuxian
ZuxianLv3Zuxian

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Palosians
PalosiansLv2Palosians

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Hoshiandme
HoshiandmeLv4Hoshiandme

Good writing. Interesting characters and the prologue was nice. Your thoughts regarding dreams jn the beginning Kept me interested. They go in line to my own thoughts too, So it quite intrigued me a bit. Enough to continue looking into the book.

varean
vareanLv2varean

Firstly, good job to the author! I've only read the first few chapters of the book but I love the idea of the entire story. Despite a bit of grammar mistakes, the emotions and thrill was still portrayed wonderfully. I also love the current book cover as it speaks everything the book is for. Just keep updating, and never give up! All the best~

Norah_Koch
Norah_KochLv5Norah_Koch

Noticed grammatical mistakes, but not big enough to turn me off. The cover picture is beautiful. It gives off a mysterious feeling that suits the title. The premise of the story is good, but I believe that author can do better if there is a balance between showing and telling, and consistency in tenses. Goodluck!

Peltivierre
PeltivierreLv11Peltivierre

The mystery that surrounds the plot and the MC is thrilling and would keep your attention on the novel. Although the paragraphs are too long for me, I could always adjust my preferences for a good book.

TaintedMetal
TaintedMetalLv2TaintedMetal

Engaging from the start, the story starts off strong with a glimpse regarding dreams and the power of it, to the point where it becomes very clear that dreams are what makes the story in the first place. The author knows how to make the reader engaged by having scenes that require attention, as well as meaningful narration from the narrator. Although there's slight mistakes in grammar, such as "i" used for the narration instead of the usual "I", it does not heavily affect how the story is told. Bonus points on having a protagonist who is different from others. Philip has a clear ambition on his actions, and his need to fill that role as a hero. Keep on writing author. So far so good!

GCarre
GCarreLv11GCarre

I like the introduction of dreams. The melodramatic scene afterward and the unsuspected event after. I'll continue reading to find out the mystery and see the improvement of the story

inflict
inflictLv4inflict

Here are the five stars. May our good dreams do come true. Continue writing! I added your book to my library.

Decree_Woods
Decree_WoodsLv2Decree_Woods

Great dialogue and transition. I love how you portray the scenes and i love the concept of your story. Personally, I experienced something like this sometimes. One time i dream about me and my crush talking lmao well fragments of it, then the next morning it really did happen well he approach me first haha. Well i really like your story it got me hooked on the first chapter just thinking of dreaming about future scenarios is exciting and i like how he does his best to solve any problem. Overall a great read , Wating for more. [img=update] [img=recommend]

isharislynkia
isharislynkiaLv11isharislynkia

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delanasiwarka
delanasiwarkaLv14delanasiwarka

Well, this just reminded me of Final Destinantion somewhat! And I love premonitions stories like this. the concept is super interesting and it got me hooked. good job author!

Diamond_Air
Diamond_AirLv10Diamond_Air

Oooo, loved this one! Especially your concept of dreams. I wouldn't like some of my dreams to come true though. heh... but then what you said about it may be true. Characters are great and the plot's awesome! Good job author!

bibiyenini
bibiyeniniLv3bibiyenini

It is like the Korean Drama I watched recently entitled While You Were Sleeping! The dreams came true and it turns out to be a nightmare! The author gave another twist for this! Keep it up!

xxTenxx
xxTenxxLv2xxTenxx

This novel is pretty good! I'm amazed on how the author describe the whole scenario in the story. I like how it relates in real life situation which really hooked me in the first chapter. Good job author!

soulla
soullaLv1soulla

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madskie00017
madskie00017Lv11madskie00017

The concept of the story got me actually interested in reading this. Though, I must say I am not a fan of reality-fictions. But, reading the synopsis I gave it a chance. Gladly, it did not disappoint me at all. It was worth my time. I truly enjoyed reading the story. Though, I have few concerns such as the congestion of the paragraphs that may be too dragging for other readers. Lastly, I recommend Grammarly or any application that may help you with minor grammar errors. In totality, I will still give this a 10/10 despite of minor issues. Not all authors could pull off such concept. Keep it up author-nim! More Chapters.