I give this book one hundred stars! There is a nice plot and interesting scene. I can't wait to find out what happen next!!! Keep it up!!!ššš
So, I will be giving my honest opinions as a reader. I very like the idea of the story and it have a lot of potential in my opinion. Though, I hope that the mistakes can be fix so that it improves the reading experience as sometimes it bugs my brain. Though, I also make a lot of mistakes so... yeah. The author is a great storyteller, the story is captivating and if the mistakes can be fix, a lot of improvement will be seen. Anyway, I like the story a lot. Keep up the good work author!
l really loved the idea of your story. After each and every dream of the mc, I wished that you could save the day. I hope that you will upload more chapters with different stories. Keep it up.
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It's scary to see some scary, gory things even in your dream only... that also as a child. But it's nice he grow up and become someone who determined to change one's fate. It is good story and I hope the author can keep writing this thrill story
Heya Author!!!Just saw the synopsis and I'm already interested in the story. . Hoping for a good story I am eager to read more. Keep writingš
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The novel is really good. I really liked the writing style, and how the story is explained. The pace is good too. HIGHLY RECOMMEND!![img=recommend][img=recommend]
This book is worth reading. Five stars because it deserves it. I m halfway through the novel and I m already hooked. I love the story, the pacing is smooth too. Keep going Authorš
The plot is really interesting. You have a great idea for this book. Every chapter, you make sure to give detailed events. Looking forward to more of your improving writing and intriguing chapters. ā
Aside from grammar, this book is actually really good. I've read the prologuoe and first 3 chapters. So far so good. Complements to the author.
A very interesting read. -The plot is sound and consistent. -Characters are human-like and has proper progression. -And this book gives you events that you'd least expect!
Your a really good writer. Once I started reading I couldn't put the book down. The only flaw I could find was that you often used past tense and present tense in the wrong situation or used 'the' a bit too often. Other than that, it was amazing and I really love hoe you put it all together.
Considering the fact that the author claimed to be new to writing, I doubt that is true. The writing of the story was on point with few grammar mistake and if that is due to the author being new to writing then I can't even imagine what would happen when the author starts to improve.
I just started reading this and found myself interested in this story. It is first pov and you grt a lot of understanding from MC. The new characters that are introduced comes with good timing as well. Only thing I would suggest is To double check punctuation errors. Besides that, well done Author!
Nice and interesting synopsis and prologue. Got one to read on, can't wait to find out more about Philip. Great piece here, full of mysteries and ur writing skill is just on point
I love the plot and where this story seems to be going š Great job author. I like the way it started with a definition for dreams. It allowed the readers to see what they can expect from this lovely novel. And just reading the initial chapters, I already like the MC ā„ļø if you are looking for good reads, read this.