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Dream Training : The Champions

Agis_Z99

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Agis_Z99
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It was my first English novel, so there would be a lot of flaws in it. If you think this novel readable then please continue, but if you think the English in the novel is too bad to interrupt your reading pleasure, then stop reading. English is not my mother tongue, but one of the ways to improve English is to keep writing and reading. Because it's hard for me to improve English if I have to stop writing this novel. The background of this novel is an alternate reality with references of players from the real world. I apologize if there any fan of a club or a player was offended by my writing.

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Lidi
LidiLv4Lidi

good novels. get us excited about football. however, the novel is too focused on the match. come on. it's about Mc who is a player. also a human. can't the author, write a few chapters about Mc. about agents, sponsorship contracts, friends outside the club, social life. unlucky. So far the chapter on Mc's social life has only revolved around. 1. Family in Japan. about 2-5 chapters..? 2. Holiday Mc with an assistant which is not explained at all. come on man. give a little stress reliever for Mc and readers

Truth_Only_Reader
Truth_Only_ReaderLv5Truth_Only_Reader

I finally found a gem, thank you for making this author. If you feature blue lock or something into this I would be a very happy man. But overall I really like this book and it is one of those hidden gems in we novel.

KenYotsuba
KenYotsubaLv1KenYotsuba

I recommend this novel. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

DogMomDadBroSis
DogMomDadBroSisLv4DogMomDadBroSis

😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁Love it mate😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Reader1112
Reader1112Lv4Reader1112

h . hghhhhhhh . h h .. . . . .. .. . .

Carre_Four
Carre_FourLv1Carre_Four

Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Goodjob!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!!!

KalEl
KalElLv11KalEl

Why has Kazuki become so bad at forgetting goals in recent chapters? And only assists gives! I'm reading about Kazuki, not other players! Kazuki needs to be the best and not the average player!!!!!

Pillpoppa_13
Pillpoppa_13Lv14Pillpoppa_13

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edgy
edgyLv13edgy

Its not bad.... I kept reading on to know if the mc will be the main but nop... u don't focus in mc at all πŸ˜•..sorry my english is bad I hope u can understand this !!!!! I request the author to look read The greatest of all time...I swear it's the best novel..

Mr_Cuddles_9321
Mr_Cuddles_9321Lv1Mr_Cuddles_9321

currently in chap 18 so far the story is good. it has a lot of potential. I like like the fast pace and no drama so far. Pretty πŸ‘. ...........

RedKaizer
RedKaizerLv12RedKaizer

Got to give this 5 stars. The author is so much good at explaining football matches. It like you can see the game happening while you read. The story is about Kazuki got a system that allowed him to train! In sleep! The pace and progression of the story are absolutely great!

Mr_Hozuki
Mr_HozukiLv5Mr_Hozuki

I like your novel, keep the good work man!!!! just didn't like your naming..... Good sport novel............................ I like your novel, keep the good work man!!!! just didn't like your naming..... Good sport novel............................

Daoist_Nyanko_Bub
Daoist_Nyanko_BubLv10Daoist_Nyanko_Bub

Since this dream training, can Kazuki daydream while dreaming and training in the future? **************************************************

Tianlong31
Tianlong31Lv4Tianlong31

β€”-β€”β€” Masterpieeceeeeee πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯β€”β€”β€”- ..........................................…...............................................................

OluwaTbright
OluwaTbrightLv3OluwaTbright

The story is quite good. The grammar of course could be better,but still,it's ok. Though,I would have preferred you you used real players, and not made up ones. Overall,it's nice.

kobeblackmamba
kobeblackmambaLv7kobeblackmamba

Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Goodjob!!!!!![ Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Goodjob!!!!!![

Truth_Only_Reader
Truth_Only_ReaderLv5Truth_Only_Reader

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Kola_David
Kola_DavidLv4Kola_David

Love the book. As long you keep releasing new chapter steadily on daily basis or like 5 chapter a week or more I will keep voting and supporting you.[img=update][img=update]

Rylne
RylneLv1Rylne

nice! nice! nice! nice! very nice!! nice! nice! nice! nice! very nice!! nice! nice! nice! nice! very nice!! nice! nice! nice! nice! very nice!!