It was my first English novel, so there would be a lot of flaws in it. If you think this novel readable then please continue, but if you think the English in the novel is too bad to interrupt your reading pleasure, then stop reading. English is not my mother tongue, but one of the ways to improve English is to keep writing and reading. Because it's hard for me to improve English if I have to stop writing this novel. The background of this novel is an alternate reality with references of players from the real world. I apologize if there any fan of a club or a player was offended by my writing.
good novels. get us excited about football. however, the novel is too focused on the match. come on. it's about Mc who is a player. also a human. can't the author, write a few chapters about Mc. about agents, sponsorship contracts, friends outside the club, social life. unlucky. So far the chapter on Mc's social life has only revolved around. 1. Family in Japan. about 2-5 chapters..? 2. Holiday Mc with an assistant which is not explained at all. come on man. give a little stress reliever for Mc and readers