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DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered]

Author: Monster_Paradise
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Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

it is really not that good. If your bored you can read this to pass your time though, Author doesn't know how to make a story up and just follows the plot. but he already ruined the plot. and power level makes no sense. It feels like he gets nerfed.

Piotr_Uklejewski
Piotr_UklejewskiLv4

******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************

TokyoBryanIII
TokyoBryanIIILv11

Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going

Candra_Saputra_1820
Candra_Saputra_1820Lv5

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Bloodydemonking_19
Bloodydemonking_19Lv12

I give a five star rating this is one of the best fan fix I read today I was reading it all day today hopefully we can get more then one update a week

Carefree_Sensei
Carefree_SenseiLv14

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ZinkTW
ZinkTWLv2

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world0first
world0firstLv3

the story is goood but the novel is no longer updeted SO...................OFF MY LIABERY YOU GO.......................................................

AbsoluteCarnage
AbsoluteCarnageLv13

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DanteSama
DanteSamaLv5

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Sophie_Torres
Sophie_TorresLv12

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YisusXR
YisusXRLv4

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Sandle_Cow
Sandle_CowLv14

It is amazing keep it up It is amazing keep it up It is amazing keep it up It is amazing keep it up It is amazing keep it up It is amazing keep it up thank you for a wonderful story

SCP_UnKnown
SCP_UnKnownLv14

Best DBZ Fanfic definitely great journey to read just be wanting more after chapter ends lol πŸ˜‚ I have become addicted lol πŸ˜‚ so will you once you’re eyes read the first chapter πŸ˜‚πŸ‘Œ All I can say is amazing novel and I love it hopefully other will to show support for this novel to reach 1,000 chapters πŸ™Œ πŸ₯³

Phantom_Zero_v2
Phantom_Zero_v2Lv5

(γƒŽο½€Π”Β΄)γƒŽε½‘β”»β”β”» (γƒ˜ο½₯_ο½₯)γƒ˜β”³β”β”³ ┏(οΌΎ0οΌΎ)β”› (ο½’`ο½₯Ο‰ο½₯)ο½’ Ζͺ(˘⌣˘)Κƒ Ζͺ(β€Ύ.β€Ύβ€œ)┐ οΌΌ(゚ー゚\) γƒ˜(οΏ£Ο‰οΏ£γƒ˜) γ€œ(κ’ͺκ’³κ’ͺ)γ€œ ...........................................................

michael7022
michael7022Lv5

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JaxWolf4
JaxWolf4Lv4

It is a great story so far, however I have a few problems with it: 1. It does not feel like the story is developing because you really haven't started the canon DBZ timeline yet and you are already 70+ chapters in. 2. The MC gets a little bit annoying at times when he gets cocky from a new power boost and there is a little too much perversion from the MC Enjoyable Parts: 1. The book is very satisfying if you are looking for an OP character. 2. The updates are very good and are very consistent. 3. The system that is used is satisfying and fun to read. 4. Seeing the MC interacting in the DB story line is interesting seeing that he already knows what is going to happen. 5. Quality of writing is good. Overall, I find it to be an enjoyable read, but it has a few issues. I will change my review to 5 starts when the story starts developing more.

Candra_Saputra_1820
Candra_Saputra_1820Lv5

πŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘Š

world_travler
world_travlerLv4

Probably the best dragon ball story on this site tbh. The author makes sure the story is engaging. Packed with a lot of action and comedy makes you want to go back and reread it over and over again.

Facu360
Facu360Lv2

Esta muy bueno me gusto mucho πŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺ✌πŸ’ͺ✌πŸ’ͺ✌πŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺ✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌πŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺ✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌