it is really not that good. If your bored you can read this to pass your time though, Author doesn't know how to make a story up and just follows the plot. but he already ruined the plot. and power level makes no sense. It feels like he gets nerfed.
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Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going
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I give a five star rating this is one of the best fan fix I read today I was reading it all day today hopefully we can get more then one update a week
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the story is goood but the novel is no longer updeted SO...................OFF MY LIABERY YOU GO.......................................................
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It is amazing keep it up It is amazing keep it up It is amazing keep it up It is amazing keep it up It is amazing keep it up It is amazing keep it up thank you for a wonderful story
Best DBZ Fanfic definitely great journey to read just be wanting more after chapter ends lol π I have become addicted lol π so will you once youβre eyes read the first chapter ππ All I can say is amazing novel and I love it hopefully other will to show support for this novel to reach 1,000 chapters π π₯³
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It is a great story so far, however I have a few problems with it: 1. It does not feel like the story is developing because you really haven't started the canon DBZ timeline yet and you are already 70+ chapters in. 2. The MC gets a little bit annoying at times when he gets cocky from a new power boost and there is a little too much perversion from the MC Enjoyable Parts: 1. The book is very satisfying if you are looking for an OP character. 2. The updates are very good and are very consistent. 3. The system that is used is satisfying and fun to read. 4. Seeing the MC interacting in the DB story line is interesting seeing that he already knows what is going to happen. 5. Quality of writing is good. Overall, I find it to be an enjoyable read, but it has a few issues. I will change my review to 5 starts when the story starts developing more.
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Probably the best dragon ball story on this site tbh. The author makes sure the story is engaging. Packed with a lot of action and comedy makes you want to go back and reread it over and over again.
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