I've got to say, this is really good and I hope it never get dropped. I wanna see MC having kids Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome
Please keep writing this and don't give it up!! This is very good and creative. The story so far is amazing I can't wait to see more as other him, raditz and goku team up. :) :). :) :) d:):):):):):)):):):):):):))::)):)::):)):):):):):):(:)):
Los últimos 50 capítulos son una novela china generica, bofetadas, jóvenes maestros, dichos chinos, nombres chinos, sectas chinas, insultos chinos, etc. No es dragon ball. 1 estrella por falso, si quieres escribir una novela china escribe una novela china no uses dragon ball para tener más lectores.
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it's one of the best I read so far hdjsjdbdjdksjsdbdjsjsjbdsjsidjddudbhubidugdbusinsniinsmidbuindunsybindijdbubydubsijsbusubsoksubnj
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good book I love both the books and how both books go different paths makes it so much more interesting. can't wait to read more. you did a good job on the personalities.
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I hope author is still alive and well 😅😂 please continue this work it’s really a great fanfic!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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So far nice plot story Need more mass chapter 😎😎😎😎😎 F6t7f6d67fuf7srryscuvitddye6cudusyduhydrd7uftytfggdyxygycudyfiutrtfduritgyjrftjyktcjufr5gduduufg9g9ucggifgifigghoudcugcufyohufuchhcuuchviudyhigfugigivifigghicfuudghgcigoicucghudfgif7guuhhjhoojhohhjoj
Is there anyone that knows proper English? I couldn't stand them. the story is inconsistent most of the time. sometimes the mc would make a dumb decision but atleast its bearable.
This us the first Dragonball fanfic i've ever read and I have to say that this one is very good. I truly enjoy reading this fanfic and I look forwards to how the story progresses. Keep up the good work Author and I hope you can update soon.
This novel is great and all but dude it's getting boring! I read this for a dragonball fanfic not a "cultivation novel" cause no matter how you say it this is clearly looking a lot like some cultivation novel -_- I've read so much cultivation novels that the cliche cultivation talks in the latest chapters sounds so cringy so please! Turn it back to dragonball.