Dark_Bangali
There's a huge loophole in this novel .. if his wife truely bound by life contract at least they put something or protect him so they won't die .. it doesn't make sense they only put Julia and butler guy .. They're Goddess from there perspective continent and yet they can't put at least 8 tier .old man. To keep him safe ..
Guys don't read this s***t because the author is nerfing the mc by making the excuse to make the mc adapt to his current powers. This is such a bull**** since mc has the innate adaptability skill which makes him adapt to his skills faster but still the mc doesn't upgrade his powers due to his underestimation of his own powers even when his retained xp can amount to directly promote him to level 4 star but still won't progress. You know why that is, it's because this author wants to show his extreme hardships and s***t when the mc has the power to destroy anything he has. I say it's a waste of time to see his hardships when he can destroy his problems which op skills. Sigh I really wanted a good kingdom building novel with op mc.
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. Give my exp 'novel' a good review with a reminder and I'll leave you another 5 star ;) 17. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
not good, contradicts alot of things through out story, no depth in romance or kingdom building or well story plot in general, need proof reading i mean like "she was mad and couldnt continue eating so she stopped talking and continued eating" and this type of writing continues to happen alot throughout the story
Good story but the author seems to have forgotten that the MC's system is supposed to help him level up because it the current chapters the mc has an excessive amount of unused experience points that for some reason he won't use even if he or someone he cares about life is in danger(like in the latest chapter how he almost died but it could have been avoided if the MC had used his exp. points.
One of the great book I read on the platform- The mc is overpowered, there's kingdom building & war,I like the romance and sub-plots and slice of life chapters & it's update regularly___ but sometimes the MC's action looks like pure stupidity like not leveling up & just stockpiling experience points~ the system seems useless in the recent chapters beacuse the MC doesn't use it efficiently & there are some contradictions in the story!!Overall it's an amazing story with some little probelms!