Author notes(turned Aux)

----Note for future reference if your reading this chapter it may have spoilers if i add a comment referring to a future chapter.----

Yo I'm editing some chapters making them more cohesive and worded more nicely. I also remade the synopsis and made a massive lore dump chapter in aux chapters there is spoilers for the next like 8ish chapters somewhere in that lore dump so be careful reading it. Also i try to read all the comments and stuff and reply, if you dont understand something tell me specifically so i can corrected it for future readers maybe make it more explained. Sometimes when I'm writing I'm in such a state where i dont realize that some people wont understand my words. As in real life people often have a hard time understand what I'm saying since i often say/write things in a overcomplicated way or oversimplified way. I am also very obsessives about details and information so I may go overboard when responding and stuff since I wrote like several pages of notes on things. i have a whole 3 pages of college rule notebook pages of just notes about Sayians. Soooo if I "correct" or something I don't mean to be rude at all, I just love to research things.

I'll keep this chapter so people can use it for commenting questions as i got a lot of those so far and you can ask the little personal questions about stuff like how I reply to comments and stuff. I may get a little rude or defense towards those so sorry if I am. I will edit this chapter to answer those questions like:

Emetaro Posted:

Q:Could he not ask mafic to make him smarter somehow?(give him some geniuses DNA)or download the essential technologies of the the truffles to take so he can study on his own too?

A: Well Basically he is Smart, Smarter than any human, which he was in his past life. Just now he is a Tuffle so his once human intelligence that was improved by Tuffle intelligence and education is blown away by true Tuffle scientists. The ones that escaped away...Ones that were considered the smartest of the smart among the Tuffle society and which is why they were able to escape. I should also mention that generally it has been a few generations since the escape its not like directly after. So the intelligence gap is there for just general reference. The Tuffles in my story also lack creativity for new inventions which is why the stolen tech of the infinite ki generator blew Mafic's mind. Remember IQ doesn't correlated with true intelligence. Also he does have the technology but i dont think i included that specifically so ill write that in more clearly.

Gogo_Lolo Posted:

Q:don't make just three paragraphs it makes it impossible to read and makes it look like a small chapter like this one i didn't even read it

A:I am not going to, everyone has a unique writing style. I replied to this with a more in-depth rant... I have gotten pissed at some of the writing styles I have seen. Yet I still read the novels though because I liked the story, if its a problem for you don't read my story honestly... This is how you rightly piss me off, these are the comments that make some people stop writing please dont be like this guy, I won't stop writing but some of my favorite stories had ended because of things like this. If you want to rag on my story and say its bad thats fine I can even agree with it, but writing is where i will draw the line. Does bring up the topic though, I am perfectly fine with anyone bad mouthing this novel though I am writing this because I binged the entire series again and wanted to have a little fun with it. So I don't mind if you want to comment on anything bad, but please do make sure you explain why so I can improve!

Emetaro Posted:

Q:could he not find this universe version of broly? the strongest sayian. maybe further down the line.

A:I really like your questions they are the type i would ask, i replied to this but ill say it here as well. Kale the version of Broly in universe 6 is actually like 20ish years younger than broly. Z is 13 now the same age as goku in the time line. Age doesn't really matter later on the story since they all practically dont age physically, but for linking up timeline and stuff. I checked all the characters ages and stuff that way Z doesn't get op too quickly with the whole genetics stuff. I was surprised at the age difference with kale and broly and i wanted the to do the whole universe 6 thing and Tuffles being still alive there since sayians never left Saladala. It was very neatly wrapped up for me for lining things up too. For future reference Goku is 43 at the time of dragon ball super tournament saga.

_Vega Posted

Q:Tuffles are not weak, they are weaker than saiyans, but they are much stronger than humans, 1000-10000, they are native to a planet 10x the gravity of the earth. Saiyans only won the war because of Oozaru and Zenkai

A:Wrong, they are actually weak in ki they are considered a non ki civilization with no ability to use ki naturally. Yes physically they are very strong with a very dense gravity and natural evolution to that kind of gravity. Their inability to use ki is actually mentioned in the manga. If they had more than 1000 ki they would've won the war since the sayians that landed had a power level of 1000 and was able to increase there power with Oozaru transformation with a 3x boost. Sayian lore is long and i mean LOOOOOONG, Tuffles in comparison have little lore and few mentions of ki use and the mentions of their use in ki is a lack of ability.

Sandford_96 Posted

Q:Lost me with the past two chapters the whole having to find peace crap because vados said so. now hes gone from wanting to kill goku to letting him spend more time with his son? to big of a personality change ruined it.

A: Vados never specifically say find peace, she's an angel her job is to literally curb a being called the god of destruction there is a little manipulation there. What Vados really wants is the person who originally placed Z into Dragon ball Captured. That person who brought Z into Dragon ball wants Z to cause chaos by imprisoning Z, Vados could possibly lure this person out. Finding peace and Z's decisions are more based on him not wanting to be a puppet. He was never truly evil, just an asshole. So killing Goku was never his actual intentions, The evil version of himself shifted the shame and regret of his own actions onto someone else a person who ultimately was a terrible father just like Z felt. It isn't a 180 because he was never evil, instead by helping Gohan he can prove to himself that he wasn't a terrible father. Thus allowing himself to enjoy his life in an ideal world. Don't get me wrong the change was not perfect but I'm not the best writer, thats why i am looking to improve. I apologize if you were looking for a murder hobo mc, that's not what I tried to write.

DonaldSenju Posted

Q:why mantain 50% of Tuffle DNA? Is pretty much useless other than giving an above average intelligence.

A:Just as Baseline, Cell was more alien due to being more namekian and frieza DNA. The Tuffle DNA would act as a genetic stabilizer for any negative mutations. The DNA will slowly change anyway eventually it be like 25% DNA or lower as new genetics are added. Good question none the less.

Aizen_Sousuke Posted

Q:how could he stay on a planet with 300x earths gravity and only have 34k power level?

A:good question, this is because he is technically part machine after the absorption of the gete star, Most of the androids can survive high gravity, all of the universe survival tournament fighter could despite some of them not having that high of power level. (the tournament arena was built for god of destruction to fight in) You don't need a high power level to survive high gravity. Tuffles were able to survive high gravity compared to their normally low power levels I covered the Tuffle thing early on. I will make it clearer.