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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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Author's Note

This is my first time writing a fanfic and I decided to do so because a lot of their other dbz fanfics are shit. I'm sure there's some gem I haven't discovered but the rest of them are just hot garbage water so I decided to write my own. Also, if I'm keeping it 100, I thought I could make a sizable amount of (Patr) eon money from this endeavour but fear not, I too at heart am a cheap fuck so there is absolutely no way I'm charging or pay-walling my chapters because I know I wouldn't do the same.

The story will be based on the canon arcs in chronological order but will deviate from them because Broly is the protagonist (spoiler alert) and I will involve all of the movies (because team four star made them funny as hell and I can't leave out that type of content). Despite my laziness, I want the story to have a decent foundation, as I have seen a lot of works fall apart because the initial momentum ran out so Broly isn't going to be doing Broly things for at least a hundred chapters which I know is upsetting but I'm going to try and cushion the ride until we get there. This fanfic is structured to be long as hell so don't feel too defeated if Broly doesn't take over as MC immediately, we're getting there.

I'm a native English speaker but that doesn't make me infallible, I can make silly errors but I try to proofread before I publish chapters. I plan to finish this as initially I was writing for myself personally then I said 'duck it' and published the first five chapters and saw it hit 100k in like 3 days, then I semi-abandoned it because I had exams (which I aced) but now I'm picking it up again.

I really want this to feel like a dbz community in a sense where discussions about characters or your feelings about a certain thing DBZ can be expressed, oftentimes it feels like I'm yelling into a cave and hearing my own echo whenever I publish a chapter and so far I've only managed to lure in horny people who only care about whether Vados or Kefla are in the harem or not.

On that note, I'm going to have this be reasonably romantic, a lot of other works, in general, are really dry when it comes to exploring love in a world so warning now a few of the canon relationships will be SLIGHTLY altered but ultimately interesting.

I can't promise a Harem in the novel but I can promise that Broly will dick down more than one woman at some point.

I will try my best to flesh out characters, I don't like a vagueness of any kind in my novel so I might over-explain a few things, please comment if it gets too OD.

I want the fanfic to be logical, 'The True Legendary Super Saiyan' was my favourite fanfic then Broly went world-hopping and I lost hope. Reviews and Comments will really be must best friend, I actually want to hear your opinion, even if it's unrelated to the chapter, I just like to see what people are thinking.

My word count goal is over 1000 words per chapter, let me know if you think the chapter length is too short but to be honest, at this rate I can publish a chapter every day and write another chapter that goes into the storage that way if I break my hands or some fucked shit, you guys can still read.

I think that's all I have to say and please please please leave suggestions or things you want to see in the novel (because I work best when I'm bouncing off something - that sounded gay as shit, no homo lmao) and enjoy the novel!

Thank you for reading!