Mindviper81
We are not told much about this world, everything seems forced and unexpected. It would be best to teach us more about the world in a prologue. Some words are misspelled but it does not distract from the story. Other words like βlittleβ is changed into βlilβ which messes with the story. It would be better to either not use it at all or use the normal spelling.
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