Douluo Dalu The Story Of Lin Hua

So this is going to be my first novel i don't know if anyone will read this but if their is one i hope you enjoy. As this is my first novel you will expect some wrong grammar cause I'm not that good at english. I'm also open for some criticism so that i can improve and you can also comment for ideas. I don't know if I'll finish this novel cause I'm only 15 and i have school but I'll try. *This story is inspired from Douluo Dalu- The Story of Sheng Feilong by Yozuka its a really good novel so check that out* *This is also a Douluo Dalu fanfiction in the timeline of DD3(Legend of The Dragon King)* ^Synopsis^ Kim Kyungseok a genius known as the Golden Prodigy died and met god which gave him thre wishes. He was reborn in the world of soul beast and soul masters known as the Douluo Dalu universe. Join him as he goes on adventures throughout the douluo continent with his spirit and determination he shall fulfill his dream of becoming a god.