Reviews of Douluo Dalu: Legend of Xiao Yan(Hiatus)

author, everything is good except for the part there will be 8 girls in the harem so I, a normal human with morality can say that I will drop this. the only frickin time I liked harem was in TDG and that only had 2 girls so bye bye.

Keep up the good work author san! .......................................... keep up the good work author san! ..........................................

I guess i got a little ahead of myself...? I expected the MC to be a bit stronger, but guess this story is going another route. And as the author has stated in response to another review, it seems the MC's talent is truly one of the most pathetic. Imma head out here, but the story itself is not bad, just not to my preference with a weak and untalented, and in some cases pretty foolish MC.

well its just normal face slapping fanfic mc got lower cultivation but higher strenght so everyone understimates him so yeah boring so yeah for some reson his talent is trash bruh and i didnt even continue read cuz u had to add another oc makes no sense why xuenr would be there too bruh so overal bad

I read up to chapter 16 but all I can say is the story sounded like “ blah blah blah” so far so I’m out ☹️ Stjetjeyjeyjuejeyjeyjeyjeyjeyjyejeyjeyjeyjeyjyejeyjeyjeyjeyjeyjeukeyjeyjeyjyejeykeyk

It said he would return to earth. Does that even happen???? As far as I can see, its only written in the bio to attract attention. -- -- -- ;(

Honestly, this under is a hidden gem, its severly underrated and deserve to be within the top 20 at least. Some advertisement is needed to boost readers. The english is above average and the person tries to writes correctly with little mistakes. Also the summary needs to be fixed, the disclaimers are fine but you need to add that while you can take a bad rating, but must state WHY and not just say that they didnt liked it. its really bad and turn off readers having a bad summary. It barely explains anything about the story. Also the MC having the same name as xiao yan is confusing. Now onto the story? its really good, i just wish there were more world building and character and background details as for those who dont know the 2 novels you took for fanfic, nobody will understand whats going on and thats BAD. I also didnt liked that you skipped the climax of the fight between MC and the fire girl.

WQ-5 SD-2 CD-3 US-4 WB-5 It was good until his future self and the Dragon appeared , once he starts talking to them it will eat 1 - 2 chapters. Making the progress of the story slower and so many nonsense in their interactions, at first it was funny but using it too much will make it irritating.

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supporting my filipino brother please continue to bring us sustainable through you writing and I wish you ideas to put in your story. peace and love from your fellow pinoy.

Story in and on it self is good overall but there are things that I personally don't want to see, and I'm sure there are other like me too Firstly it's about his talent, it feels like you're nerfing him in a way that makes it not so obvious hy lowering his speed in cultivation, his spirit and such then go to balance it with techniques or heavenly flames, another problem comes with heavenly flames and that is it gives you the image of ultimate solution to all his no talent issues, and that just feels forced. I don't mean to offend you but to me it seems you just don't know how to scale his growth as to not make it tasteless OP but in doing so you're adding meaningless struggles. Secondly, it's his emotional state, he knows he love girl "A" but then he is scared to confess, which is understandable but the problem comes when it feels, and sometimes even shows, he knows it's two way feeling yet he doesn't act upon it. and if you're reason is because he has feelings for girl "B" that he can't come clean to it, that is a question in it self. relationship doesn't work on assuming but in action. Thirdly is some small grammar and dictations that could be easily solved. Overall I'd say you're book has potential but needs fine tuning.

Despite some mistakes in grammar, the author is doing a good job so far and has added quite a few moments that are comedy gold. The story is interesting in my opinion after a reading several chapters first and the character design for the MC is good. All in all a good story that doesn't make the reader question their eyesight. Keep it up.

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it's good. more more it's good. more more it's good. more more it's good. more more it's good. more more it's good. more more it's good. more more it's good. more more it's good. more more it's good. more more :D

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Yeah I really don't see what's so bad for this fic, Appearently Xiao Yan from btth died got yeeted to Earth with no memories then Yeeted to Soul land with Btth properties Kinda funny tbh, I also like how you can combine the Properties of Btth with Soul Land logically and also every review that was bad in this Fanfic are literally mad over the smallest reasons, Like he has a Harem... Sure I mean if ya don't like that then just don't read it the Harem isn't even the Main point atleast it ain't one of those DxD Fanfics where you have 10+ Girls with no Romance Development and Issei is left to die for wanting to be the Harem King even though the MC of said DxD Fanfic became the Harem King himself, the writing Quality is the only 3 stars because it has some misspelled Words throughout the story but you've mention english isn't your main language so it's reasonable

Its confusing sometimes but otherwise really good also like the ryujin jakka fav weapon ever also im wondering if ur doing bloodline suppression thing like i dd3 cause fire dragon king should suppress most dragons and all fire dragons like if he goes against the emperor team because FDK also has lighi g fors it supress and does xun er supress master she is like holy lightning dragon or what ever hers is

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