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Unfortunately, although the author has done well in terms of readability, it comes off a little boring and childish, I was hard pushed getting to chapter 16. Also, I know this may seam a little biased but I also hated Oscar in the orignal, it put me off when he was added, especially when I know what will happen. Eventually if he stays for the long run, we will get wasted chapters of his life and love story and in all honesty, I couldn’t care less of side characters. I also think the blooming relationship between MC and Yin is a little early, there 6 for crying out loud. Anyway, all the best Author, hope it all works out 👍🏻.
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