Avan
It's a very good story and since I'm following and giving stones of power Follow the story friend and do not leave it half as other people seriously, while you go up more chapters, you will see how more people are going to join to read this novel, because it is starting well, good still like this successes and wait for the next cap xD more chapterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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i recommend this novel. i started reading this a month ago but there were many mistakes so i dropped it even though i love stories with this concept. but i remembered it today and i wanted to give it another try. i was not disappointed. you got so luch better and you seem to have hired an editor. good for you. keep going, you will have my support and spirit stones. 👍😊😊👍💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
if author really wants a slow paced he should've focus on construction of base and looking for artifacts within his base .. what i meant for looking as in finding its location not getting their as if he was the one who obtained it in his past life. anyways I'm not fooling myself saying this is good apocalyptic novel. I read dozens like this so I know the fact this is not good.
This novel gives me mixed feelings, the edited chapters are better, but different editors lead to vastly different levels of quality. While many of the ideas are a good mashup of the genre, this novel is purely and simply gutted by the lack of a good editor, I read a few of the originals before editors got involved, it was unreadable. After editors the first segment of the book transformed, it was enjoyable and entertaining. But it unfortunately deteriorated over time, as anyone who reads it knows, grammer and syntax got rather lax, lots of stuff stopped making sense with plot holes popping up, characters actions not matching their personalities, all to further the rapidly thinning plot. I hope this is all fixed, because if it isn't this novel is on a one way track to a death spiral.
The pre-doomsday part was interesting. I have to be forgiving because I enjoy the author's other work but it really is a pity this one isn't dropped in favor of more chapters for the other. Author, just think of it as prepping your comatosed and repudiated first born for organ transplantation to save the much brighter and obedient youngest. Or don't think about it, but you already did. It's your choice, but now it's in your head.