Doomsday Pillars

Very good story continue please and thank you for your hard work !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

Well written and i like the fact that that the writing is straight to the point, without much unnecessary ado. Tho i have to say it's hard to relate and enjoy with the MC already have existing wife and daughter, especially when their character isn't explored at all in the story. The MC also only focus on preparation to save the world is kind of tasteless and boring without any side-plots to make.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤAlso it seems romance tag won't start until far later in the story which disappoints me when i was really looking forward for the Apocalypse Romance match up. It should have #LateRomance / #SlowRomance too.ㅤㅤAnyway. i'm not patient person so i can't really invest my time up until 150 chapters for the real action to happen.ㅤㅤGood plot but unfortunately not my cup of tea, sorry gotta drop this ٩(ര̀ᴗര́)ᵇʸᵉ

the story the best, wholesome, good choice to read if ur bored. good good good goood tomuch word needed for review lol so i have to spam alot of word

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what can I say I like it..............................,................................................................. .................

Story is intresting it kept me hooked until i reach the last chapter and with 2 chapters a week progesa is really slow. i wish author can improve on the uploads.

think this history is a good example of exaggerated tension. ( at least the start of it ) -First, you put the tragic past of the MC. It raised the tension but you quickly lowered it by the 'revival' of the family. -Then you showed the tragic story of Jerry's sister witch was raped and killed (that hit me hard, I needed some time to recover). The bad part of it was that it only raised the tension. If you removed it from the history, it wouldn't make any difference in the whole picture. I think you tried to make a sad past to Jerry witch I don't see as a bad thing but when you put rape on it, it became very uncomfortable to read. (Rape is a delicate point that can ruin a whole history if used wrongly. No one likes rape) -Then it was the death of Nina and the other people ( I was hit hard again, I liked her, she was the secretary type ). The way that you described the whole thing raised the tension a lot and I started to feel very anxious about who you would kill next. -Finally was Barry's death, he fought like a true warrior defending the children and I thought that he would get the girl that he liked and became happy. That would balance the tension and make reading more comfortable. But then you killed him and made the girl he liked a broken-heart type. That raised the tension even more and made the history suffocating to read. -Exaggerated tension isn't necessarily a bad thing but it's hard to manage properly, as your first history it's a risky option. One example of a history like this that works is Shigeki no kiojin(Attack on titan) That is my personal opinion and I hope it can be of help.

Ive literally not even read a single chapter yet I just wanted to mention that the Second chance tag is literally meant to be about going back in time, In the description you even says he goes back in time for a second chance and yet the tag isnt there 🤷‍♂️

Definitely a must read for people who like apocalypse genre. Unfortunately I am not a fan of this genre but I still have read a whopping 160 chapters. Great writing

Average 🙂 lots of grammar mistakes and logical issues. Definitely in need of a good editor or proofreader. ........................................

I couldn't read through more than 5 chapters... absolutely atrocious grammar. The weird part being that the first chapter and the authors comment aren't written like that at all. i can't review update stability or story development. The beginning/setting is meh and unbelievably constructed.

really good novel !!!!!!!!!!!

really good novel !!!!

This is a solid story and world building and despite everything sometimes the end result is not stellar add the continuity witch is lost because the actualization is too slow maybe this is why is not in the top 200 consistently.

A excellent story overall. you feel immersed in the story from the beginning, may be because of it is too much realistic and technology level equals to our world, the only con is the slow release rate but not to drop such good novel

The title of the book is misleading. It takes 200 chapters before the pillars arrive. Over two thrids of the book the main character is prepping for doomsday or gathering survivors.

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Was a great read bravo I Was really engaged in the story i hIghly recomemd this story to any And everyone. and i Seriously hope there will be more

This story is AMAZING so far. It has just about everything you could want. Apocalyptic descent, Cultivation/Lvl progression, Zombies, Monster, Towers, Kingdom building, Reincarnation, you name it it's basically in here. Absolutely fantastic.

I have read almost have the story so far and it is doing good. The writing quality is good only a few places where the sentence structure was a little rough, but not to much. So read the story.