I like the story and where it is going my only problem is every chapters is short and I it lacks some details but overall it is a good novel I recommend it if you love the Apocalypse tag
Great, exciting and interesting novel ! Thisnnovel wowed me in all aspects.. I kinda loving how the story goes and wanting to finish it up though it seems that i have to purchase power stones to be able to unlock the next chapter and wait for another week to refresh the power stones.. Hopefully next time more chapters will be easily unlocked.. Is it possible ? πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€
Luv it Luv it Luv it Luv it Luv it Luv it Luv it Luv it Luv it Luv it Luv it Luv it Luv it Luv it As long as there is no harem it's good to goπππ I recommend this book from the beginning of the story until here.πππ
Best novel I ever read, lots of research and logic in it. no OP MC, no sign of harem, the author make the doomsday believable. great job keep it up. will support author full support
Itβs hard to write a review for this story. On one hand, the author has a lot of creativity, and has created a remarkable world. There is a lot of world building, obvious research, and what looks like a lot of time and effort. The author has found a great niche in a genre that is usually just filled with the same bland cliche. I really want to explore and travel further with the story. On the other hand, this is definitely a work in progress. The author prefaces English is a second language for him, and unfortunately it shows. Personally, I found it really difficult to engage the story and submerse myself when I would have to re-read lines/sentences/paragraphs over and over to make sure I got the right meaning. For some people this is not a problem. If thatβs the case, great, I thoroughly recommend this book to you. Unfortunately I was only able to make it through the first 29 chapter before I had to quit. I will keep an eye on this new author and once he becomes big a big enough name to have editors (which I am confident he will), I will definitely rejoin his world.
Good story however some proof reading would help alot. Keep going the more you write the better you'll get.
I love all the doomsday prepping going on. Love the steady releases too. Really looking forward to the actual doomsday. I'm glad i found this novel, and i recommend you all give it a shot.
A fine doomsday reincarnation trope novel that manages to warn others about the apocalypse with great reasonings you guys should try read this
Very interesting story. This book has consistent updates and a great storyline. At the most recent chapter the main plot is finally getting started. All around great book though I think it will take a couple years to complete at the current rate of story per chapter.
nice novel ...................................................... good luck................................................................. more chapters ...................................................... good story ..............................................................
Hi Avan, is it okay if I plug my novel in the comment's section of some of your chapters? There's no direct message option yet but I want to share my story to some of your readers, hoping you'll not find it offending. In exchange, I won't mind if you plug your novel in my comment's section too.
This is an amazing book, I would love if he could save everyone that comes to his base and it would also be awesome if this kind of writing continues for the rest of the novel
Avan really wrote a beautiful apocalyptic novel. It's twenty times much better than those system based apocalyptic novels with stale themes. He went deep into research and world development starting from what was familiar to him and expanding outwards. You really must try it.
good book take my power stones for the next year that's 2 power stones a day just take it I need more letters sjdnndjdndndmdjdjdnenddidnnsjd
i really like this, it's really unique among most of the apocalypse novels I've read. also the first one I've read where getting bitten doesn't infect you. Also first apocalypse novel that I've read that takes place in Indonesia, so far they've mostly taken place in China/Korea/Japan. so a nice change of pace.
an really good story , well narrated. The mc is a great guy and you really want to follow his story. An Indonesian hero is a first, that's nice too! The author knows how to make you travel through the Indonesians' islands. keep this up, this book is truly great.
nothing words only perfection.. this story' worth to read full of imagination. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I Iove this. Just writing my favorite genre , you already have 5 star. Added that you gave us well detailed explanation regarding world-building is awesome. I hope you update more and never lose confident in writing. Cause your awesome. Dang, please create more book like this.
Really great novel one of my favorite novels.! Genuine zompie consept and a great one... Really really beautiful. Hope you can make the release time alittle better. I know u got life and life always is a busy run! But this novel worth to go on and get to fame! (I liked the review saying it is a hidden gem in web novel)
Pretty good story and the plot is good. However the grammar is terrible. Try using something like grammerly or some other spell/grammar check. Also the dialogue can be confusing.