1 Chapter 1 Louc Bartson

"Kuek..!" A kid that looked fat let out a scream.

"S-stop.. please.." The kid named Louc Barston, was currently being bullied by 3 kids same his age, the difference between him and them was that they were popular, handsome, athletic, had girlfriends, and were rich. So why were they bullying him?

"Haaaa? What do you mean stop, have you forgotten what you did to me?! You spilled your water on my clothes dumbass!" On the middle of the three bullies stood a black haired kid showing a leader vibe.

"Get him, get him! Hahaha, this is your fault for messing with our leader!"

"Yeah, yeah!"

The other two on the side of the leader egged him on to keep bullying Louc.

'I'm angry, I'm angry but I can't do anything. Why? Why am I sitting on the floor? Why is that the world is unfair? Why is it that, not even one of you are helping me?' Loud looked at the people around him staring at him with strange gazes and cheekily laughing.

'Why are you guys laughing? Why are you staring at me like that? Did I do anything wrong to get this kind of treatment?'

"Wh- what did I even do to deserve this kind of t- treatment.?" Loid looked at the man at the middle.

The man in the middle named Joshua Jones started laughing with a hand on his face.

"Well first is," He punched Louc's face and continued.

Kuek..! It hurts..

"You threw water at my precious clothes." Joshua then followed it with an uppercut to Louc's chin taking away abit of his consciousness.

"Second, you peeked at my Girlfriend." He then winded up for a right hook to Louc's head.

Ka.. Kauk..

"And third, because you exist." He then set up for a large final move and drop kick.

Paa!

H - help me..

Louc looked a teacher on the side looking at them, but the teacher didn't do anything and just watched, he grinned and thought that this was better than boxing.

Ah, is this the real world?

That was his last thought until he lost his consciousness.

"O - oi, dont tell me he died? AHAHAHA! Wake up, wake up!" Joshua slapped Louc's face and he didn't wake up.

"Boring, lets go." Joshua stopped and took a picture of Louc's fat naked body.

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'This sucks.. i have no money, i have no friends, i cant even fap in peace. But even if all that happened, don't stop.'

Louc who has been enduring this type of treatment for 16 years now has not stopped, nor will he ever give up.

But he thought that no matter how many times he works out and no matter how much he takes a diet, why can't he be skinny?! Why is he still fat for fucks sake?!

He slapped his belly and sighed.

It was time for his morning routine.

Suddenly something appeared in front of him.

It was a cube or a box of some sort that was glowing light blue.

Did Joshua hit me too much this time around?

Louc sighed once again and ignored the box, but the box shined even more brighter making him annoyed.

"What the do you want?!" Louc screamed and his mom heard him scream.

"Why are you screaming?!" Louc's mom got angry and shouted at him.

"S - sorry mom.. ehehe.." Louc shook his head and looked at the box or cube.

Louc squinted his eyes and touched the box.

The box glowed and dissapeared.

[Never give up, strive to be better, be the best of yourself, be you.] A dark screen with white letters appeared encouraging Louc.

?

What is that?

Louc punched the black screen.

His hand phazed through the screen, with the letters on the dark screen changing.

[Your fat, but don't worry because everyone can change, even you.]

...

Im getting really annoyed now.

Louc tried punching the screen again and the letters changed once again.

[Do you want to change yourself? {Yes/No}

I'm not about to accept something as shady as this.

Louc clicked no.

[Are you sure? {Yes/No}

Louc clicked no once again.

[Are you really sure? {Yes/No}

Is this thing making fun of me?

Louc clicked no once again but the same thing appeared.

[Are you really really sure? Your missing a once in a lifetime here buddy.]

Do i even have a choice? This machine keeps making me try and click yes!

Louc didn't give up and kept clicking no until the screen started changing colors from black to grey to light grey to white.

This went on for hours, to days, to weeks.

Louc is that stubborn, for 2 weeks he kept clicking no until the screen finally couldn't handle it anymore.

[You, I can't believe humans like you exist.. i thought humans were one of the greediest species ever, and I'm correct but I can't believe that among the billions of people in the planet, someone so.. magnificent like you exists.. you have not an ounce of greed in your heart that you won't even accept a system that will change your entire life! Oh, lord! I have struck gold!] The screen let out a tear and began praising Louc.

..?

What?

[For your reward I shall make you better, but knowing that you don't like others help and you wish to do it on your own efforts I will only give you something that will help you in the long run.]

(Skills tab being added.)

...

(Added.)

A skill tab appeared in front of Louc showing every single one of his skills, to using the remote with his feet, to peeling apples with his feet, to write with his feet, to clean himself with his feet, and a bunch more skills that he has.

Again.

What the hell is happening?

[I have given you a skill tab for you to look at your skills, I have not given you any skills as you will be mad at me if I did give you one, so all of the skills in the skill tab you have earned by yourself with your efforts.]

The screen took awhile to load the new letters.

[Each skill has a rank that you can level up to the max, starting with the lowest rank F, to E, D, C, B, A, and S, each rank equals to more knowledge of the skill and more control of the skill depending of the type of skill it can boost your strength or your intelligence. For example a roundhouse kick will give you a gigantic boost in strength if you have it in S rank, while something like a reading skill will give you a gigantic intelligence boost in S rank, but ofcourse you can only get to S rank with your hard work, even if it is not in S rank, it will still give you a boost in strength if you know how to use it correctly, after all ranks are not everything.]

[The more you use, the more you learn about the skill, the higher the chance it will rank up to the next level, so just punching mindlessly won't get you anywhere, you must use your brain.]

[Alright, bye!] The screen that was in Louc's face for 2 weeks dissapeared, leaving a confused fat Louc sitting there.

...

That screen was bothering me for 2 weeks to give me this?

A skill tab?

Louc stood up and started furiously punching the air, but he calmed himself down and thought for a few moments.

[Rank A - Mind - 1/100 you have calmed your self thus making you control yourself alot more.]

A new screen that had a blue light appeared in front of his face.

He looked at it and examined the thing in front of him.

Just like the other screen this kne is the same as well, except it didn't have a sentient mind, almost like a computer.

He wave it off and went to bed, alot has happened this past 2 weeks. He's tired after dealing with the beatings and the annoying screen that was now gone he can atleast rest at home.

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