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Writing quality is good so far, same as update stability. Story has not developed much at this point but it is interesting. Character seem a little basic. Everything is good so far worldwise (I mean it’s the real world) I can’t give 5 stars because there are one or two things I‘d change if I were in the authors shoes but it’s well done.
First of all, I'd say that introducing each character first before the start of the actual main story is quite unusual since in the usual practice the characters' depth are explored as the story progressed. Your writing is good, but assigning numbers on name is a bit confusing as people normally won't remember them quickly, so they had to return to previous chapters to remember. I'm looking forward to this work's successful future. Keep writing!