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This novel has a lot of potential. It REALLY needs an editor or proof reader to help grammar and sentence structure. Sometimes you don't even know what the author is saying because of the atrocious grammar. I give only 2 stars to writing quality because the story is good. The terrible grammar ruins lot. Which doesn't help the other categories either.
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Agh my head hurts so much. I couldn't even get past chapter 10. I know people complain about novels bad grammar but this novel feels like it was google translated.heck lntml has better translation then this. How can anyone give 5 stars for badly written grammar is beyond me. I know some of you might disagree for whatever reason, but know when the grammar is so bad that making you read it feel more like a parent correcting your son or daughters essay paper then a good time to pass the hour is a big NO for me. The story is a typical Chinese novel, Doesn't take long to figure that out. Though the update is frequent enough to keep most people despite the badly written grammar but for me it is not. Now i am not sure how much it cost to get a grammar specialist to help rewrite your novel. But whatever it cost could surely be affordable now that webnovels pays you with a contract.