Divine Emperor of Death

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MC tells his parents that he is reincarnated because of some guilt, left a sour taste in my mouth... can't continue now. I mean, can you even imagine ruining the fun of the so called reincarnation? Mc is good in martial arts? well he is reincarnated, mc is intelligent for his peers? oh well he is reincarnated! mc good in s*x, well he is reincarnated!!

It starts off good then it slowest down dramatically lots of useless things it's sad as this could have been a god tier book but the pacing and harem let it down majorly

I’ve not read much further in the novel so maybe it gets better… but for me when it reaches chapter 100 its starts going off rails. In chapter 136-138 a princess who was previously engaged to him(the MC) was under the effect of a malicious aphrodisiac which would require a male to have s*x with her to save her from dyeing he first chose to leave her do die because he has a fiancée, while I can understand him hesitating because he "loves" his fiancée but he deciders to let the princess who is under the effect die and he even said he considered her a "friend" while i do understand the fact that he was very young I still cant forgive the act of letting some one die for his own pride in a sense if he had s*x with her to save her I'm sure his fiancée who loves would forgive him based on the circumstances which the "betrayal" occurred. while he did save her in the end at the cost of a kiss which he got lowkey enraged about i cannot possibly agree with him being willing to let someone die like that, and if he actually loved his fiancée he would trust her to some extent that she would forgive him for having s*x with her friend to save her life.

bro the story has so many parts that it doesn't add anything to the plot. they're just there to roll and roll, and seriously, there are so many that it's sometimes so tiring to read that I skipped those parts. an example from chapters 450 to 600, just nothing happens, the mc doesn't focus on anything, doesn't cultivate, doesn't make pills, doesn't train, doesn't do anything. development is very frustrating, mc is more concerned with his relationships than actually training, sometimes while reading I wondered if the work is really about cultivation.

I am reading this novel and I just started today. Quick question though because I might not likeven how the story is gonna develop . I'm jot really pleased with it right now and I'd about the future. What happened to Ellis and Shirley and are they going to be in his harem? I'm so far near chapter 200.

I am currently reading chapter 300 in this noval author writer too much about other people's relationships rather than mc. I really don't want know about others relationships I think no one want. Author should focus about mc rather than other .

So honestly speaking this story is not to be read if you can't forgive and be open minded in the beginning of the story until the 100 and 120 because there is some cliché but there is a lot potential because of this cliché. Beside this, the novel is good and we can find our fill in it. I tried to read the story till improvement and i continue. I really like it and there is a lot of good idea and surprise. The author is open to improvement and constructive criticism and i agree with him. I wish for the author to keep the good job and writing as well. ** sorry if the review is confused english in not my native langage. Lord of boredom

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my god what a gem ................................................................................................................................................................................

The story is amazing and the characters are cool. It's a deep and interesting tale. Every character is different and special.

Review from consistant priviledge buyer Early chaps: yes the writing is not as good in the earlier chaps as many have stated, but i promise if you push through you will see the development and come to find the novel is amazing, this auth has made great strides to improve his writiting and you can tell how far he has come. It is worth sticking with

One of the best novel. Previously I stopped reading it and forget about this novel but after reading again from 500 chapters it was really awesome. Only issue is too much explanation in some chapters which you can avoid if needed. Anyways overall it is a good novel and Author research the contents well and try to add many new powers and words instead of copying from other novels

Well, I wouldn't have rated it 5 ⭐ is it wasn't worth it

Evelynn looks gorgeous in the cover art....

One of Best novel in WN, start its kinda kid story and it will shaped to great novel

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While a bit dragged out, the prologue was interesting with a possible kingdom building setup along with the death note element. Read up to about 50 chapters, this seems to be more slice of life along with cringing family moments between mc's parents, sister, maid and fiancées. The book of death element is rarely mentioned to the point where it probably should have been excluded. Mc is also very cliché and naïve for being an old man transmigrator.

Writing Quality 4.6 No Grammar issues, Concise and informative chapters, but sometimes mc ends up monologuing to justify his acts and what he would do to come out as the top dog in whatever scenario, and too much mc shaming himself when the whole harem building starts at least for me. Story Development 4.8 Needs some more fine tuning to always have it that little bit of extra umph. and also too much of a sword hanging on their neck vibe ,(i get that's how you want to plot to go) but more of tale of gods and demons vibe would be nice. Character Design 4.9 The best in my opinion, thus novel portrays a very healthy harem members growth as wives and no lesser mc taking a shortcut to manipulating his wives to acheive the perfect harmony. Updating Stability 5.0 I am completely satisfied with the updates, could be more as i am a greedy person but that's my issue, Author you do what you best! World Background 4.8 Great World building, nothing feels rushed even when mc starts to get a little too op, but add some solo leveling vibe of growth like dungeons and death note acting like a system someone times to make things less bland, great work in turning it less just cultivation novel and into more of an art but it's scope can be increased as in later chapters mc got into making women his like tying up loose ends (yes no problem with the harem and all) but a little more focus on writing about world building would be nice. like More Grand theft auto V vibes, the world being all for the mc for to explore and deal with issues coming to his door steps. Anyway Great Work, definitely one of the best harem novels out there, great job at doing harem building justice.

The beginning is extremely rough and diffcult to follow.There is very scarce amount of despriptions for character or scenes. Novel also neeeds better indication of when PoV swaps or when it focuses on a different character in another scene. Story is ok but MC not as clever as people think he really is. "Show not tell" only work if the character does some big brain plays. Instead MC blindly trusts others and tells of his secrets without building up any trust between him and the other person. Really really needs more scene descriptions.