EverlastingDream
I'll thickened my face and rate my own novel. Just to be your frontliner... :) First of all, thank you for all those who read this novel. And for this those who didn't, I hope you can give this novel a chance and took a peek. --- Writing a novel is something that I really liked to do. I've written a lot of it, though those works are not posted on the web as I am always afraid of what others may say about my work. Until one day, I started reading the comments and reviews from the readers of the book i was reading, and found out that writing a novel is not only about writing your imaginations and stuff but also knowing what your readers thought of what you've written. So I encourage you guys to write a review for this novel... This is for my own self-improvement, and for your own self-satisfaction... :) I hope that you'll keep reading this book... Enjoy... ;) ;) ;)
For pokemon lover, this novel is really enjoyable to read, especially when the MC started collecting pet beast. The MC is quite ***** and stupid, he made mistakes here and there but i think thats his charm, in fact im glad that he's not some typical crazy OP faceslapping and arrogant MC like most system based novel has. And he's still 15! Still a green boy, so there r rooms for improvement. It's still early to judge this novel but so far its interesting read. So...keep up the good work Dear Author~ **. My dear author, its only my personal wish but please please please don't make this a stupid romance harem novel with dense MC and stupid arrogant vixen wives, instead i suggest to make it like those shonen type books, and focused on friendship and adventure, with limited to none romance and smart heroine (if any). And i hope u add interesting side characters (preferably male lol) who has their own unique personalities and not just MC's cannon fodder/stepping stone. Ok that's all....and this is just my suggestion, and in the end everything is up to u, Dear Author. You don't have to listen to what i wrote here hehe, just u creating this story is enough after all... And im thankful for that. I wish you luck~
So starting off, this is an amazing novel, one of the best I have read on here. The plot is great, I like the direction it is going and it has alot of potential and room for growth. The author listens to his readers but doesn't just accept everything we tell him to do or change, he first weights the pros & cons it will have on the story and then sees if it fesible to add in his story(also puts his own spin on the idea to make it unique). He is also growing(tremendously) as a new author and has made less and less grammar mistakes since he started writing. The MC is very likeable and has very deep character development (he's dumb at times, but he is still a kid). The background and setting of the story is very nice and in my opinion is a unique spin on novels with similar fantasy setting. If you like novels with: Weak to strong MC, Beast taming, System(Game elements), And Magic, this is the novel for you. Should be Top 10 in original works in my opinion, at least Top 20 just needs more chapters
This might seem like a cheap rating considering I haven't started reading this yet but I feel like it already deserves one '5 Star' review for the synopsis alone. The explanation for the RPG elements IRL is phenomenal then to top it off the MC's name is Ronald. I don't know why I just love the fact that his name is Ronald. I am contemplating giving a whole other 5 star review just for that, no sarcasm.
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Its a good well plotted novel. Has neat character development as well as personal touches so the reader understands the mc in-depth. The best part is that the MC has a goal but he isnât being given a golden spoon to achieve it. In by that the A.I. System grows with the MC like a teacher to a student.