Ill start with the good. Generally the story is Id say All characters have some depth and the longer a character is around the more depth they get which is good, not to say many characters are very much layered But they do feel unique generally. Taking this as a single work the world building is fine, it doesnt feel like the world turns for the MC. My biggest gripe with the story is the telease schedule, readers were promised at one point 3 chapters a day. Personally I dont care about quantity, I prefer quality. What irks me is the lack of management of expectations. If author prefers to release 2-5 chapters at a time then perhaps have a 3 day a week release schedule. Announce it and the expectations are managed. But as it is the release pattern is erratic and it tanks the stories rating.