Announcement
This novel will be discontinued temporarily for the following reasons
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1. I (the author) have tried reading my novel, and found it rushed and hard to read. Maybe I'm holding myself to, to high a standard but I believe their are far to many flaws. I have spent the past few days trying to proofread and fix past chapters, but have come to the conclusion that it will be near impossible to fix it with anything short of rewriting chapters, which would make it hard to continuity and fluidity within the story.
2. The novel was poorly planned out from the beginning, and had zero structure. This is because I thought it'd be fun to write something, and the idea was the first that came to mind. I wrote chapters daily without ever thinking about an overarching story or endpoint, I would forget character names and mess them up having to correct this or change names by altering previous chapters.
3 Overall lack of character building and plot elements or any tension or emotion in the story.
Overall this is entirely my fault, it was due to my laziness and lack of planning or proofreading. I'm going to alter the novels past chapters a bit and keep it mostly consistent with a similar concept and story. I'm going to try to focus more on improving the quality of writing and making sure that the characters and story develop at a satisfactory level especially in newer chapters.On the positive side at least the novel didn't progress to far so the story is salvageable and new chapters will be released at some point at the end of the month
- ForerunerOfSky (Formerly SolarFlare)