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Discontinued Novel: Fighting In A New Age

"I've killed to many people in pursuit of power and success in the other world to return to my own a failure" Gyun Sung who was the greatest Kendo prodigy of all time, won the world championship at just 17. Transmigrated to Murim where he spent 7 years of his life fighting and building his own power. He reached the culmination of martial arts the Martial God stage, underwent body modification perfecting his body for martial arts, and established the most ruthless and strongest mercenary corp in all of murim the Raven Black mercenary corp. He returned to his world after dying against the combined efforts of the three murim faction leaders who destroyed everything, his reputation, his friends using money and killed him after weakening him by paying of a trusted advisor to poison him. Gyun returns to his world, his qi is gone but his experiences and martial arts. He swears to himself that money will never be a problem, he will use the only things left over from his life in Murim his perfected body that has superhuman strength and speed, his techniques and the will and determination of someone who’s lived a decade fighting a hairsbreadth from death. Authors note : I will aim for one chapter a day , sometimes maybe I will write 2 or 3 depending upon how much time I have. There may be mistakes since most chapters are written in an hour based off an idea I thought of while at school. During weekends there will definitely be 2 chapters a week, and I will make sure that every chapter has at minimum 1,000 words to a maximum of 2,000. Please tell me in comments if there are any mistakes. Also if you recommend any story ideas I might implement them. Either way thanks for reading!

ForerunnerOfSky · Realistic
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43 Chs

Announcement

This novel will be discontinued temporarily for the following reasons

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1. I (the author) have tried reading my novel, and found it rushed and hard to read. Maybe I'm holding myself to, to high a standard but I believe their are far to many flaws. I have spent the past few days trying to proofread and fix past chapters, but have come to the conclusion that it will be near impossible to fix it with anything short of rewriting chapters, which would make it hard to continuity and fluidity within the story.

2. The novel was poorly planned out from the beginning, and had zero structure. This is because I thought it'd be fun to write something, and the idea was the first that came to mind. I wrote chapters daily without ever thinking about an overarching story or endpoint, I would forget character names and mess them up having to correct this or change names by altering previous chapters.

3 Overall lack of character building and plot elements or any tension or emotion in the story.

Overall this is entirely my fault, it was due to my laziness and lack of planning or proofreading. I'm going to alter the novels past chapters a bit and keep it mostly consistent with a similar concept and story. I'm going to try to focus more on improving the quality of writing and making sure that the characters and story develop at a satisfactory level especially in newer chapters.On the positive side at least the novel didn't progress to far so the story is salvageable and new chapters will be released at some point at the end of the month

- ForerunerOfSky (Formerly SolarFlare)