Decent story that suffers from bad Grammer pretty badly at some points. MC is pretty realistic with only the occasional habit of saving the damsel in distress.
Overall, it's a good story that could use an editor but otherwise is interesting and we'll paced.
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author whatever he say or other people this is very good novel.
i highly recommend reading this if you like apocalipse with system.
The book is pretty solid as of chap 400 the only issue I have is the author getting mixed up with past and present tense. Itâs especially bad at the beginning where majority of the tenses are wrong. But apart from that, the plot and world building is quite enjoyable.
I have A question , is this novel an original one or translation?
Btw good story with decent character development , although mc seem naive
but still decent enough solid 4/5
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