Dimensional Chat Group: The Descendant of The Morningstar

I will give myself five star because why not! and to whom give me low star with unreasonable I will deleted all of it but i will shamelessly keep five and four star for myself hehe

The story is good but my only problem is the author not Uppercasing and not using commas like for example, he wrote manhattan new york instead of Manhattan, New York, and not putting commas in some sentences that needed it. That's the only problem I found, if the author fix this problems many people will read this ff.

Is your p@treon correct?Cant find you. its a good fanfic; story line is good. just some grammar stuff and some timeline stuff that didnt make sense

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Not that bad, but certainly not that good either. The mc is a joke and a lazy way for the author to justify him doing what he does. He has rich and powerful adoptive grandparents so the mc can do anything, go anywhere and buy anything he want (his grandparents bought him an internet café and a supermarket)....

I like fan-fics, but they get ruined when bring the Harry Potter world into a multiversal setting, since the power level of the Harry Potter world is so low.

1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 3. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 4 5)фон мира - 4. 6)Общая оценка - 4. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. 4) Character design - 4 5) background of the world - 4. 6) Overall rating - 4.

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Really good story so far, isn't a copypasta of alot of the dgc stories around, and not only that, the characters are actually pretty well written looking forward to reading this story for a good while

its really good novel i really like it but after reading description I think it's not a good idea to mix movie worlds and anime worlds as their logic are world apart literally

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This FF is a masterpiece...is beautiful and entertaining !I Love it!...so pleeeease release some more chapters?!?! or tell us where we can read it

5/5

I am still confused about the marvel world. But i like it. More peaceful. Don't forget the other worlds. Add it steady. But walk in your own way. And free yourself from any haters don't late them get to you or ruin your work.

Good fanfic, read with interest, I would like more interaction with the Parker family, but good for the author)

I love it and it is a great novel...Usually I don't like marvel fanfics that much but this one is a great one and I personally recommend it...

man i loved this novel this is so wholesome i wish this novel dont turn in a dark depressive novel . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .

So author, what happened to the chapters?

Es muy buena historia pero con sinceridad no me agrada la personalidad del protagonista se siente tan estúpida que me irrita hahahaha, ese sería mi único problema con la historia en si ya que la misma está bastante interesante.

Ahem, don't mind me. Just passing bye, tehe~ .