AlphaPokemon
This is a review of the story when there are only 4 chapters out so you can take this with a grain of salt. For a new author the story is pretty good. It is a little rough around the edges but it has the makings of a great story. Also one of the fewest grammatical error stories that I have read from a new author. It is only 4 chapters so far though so a lot could change depending on what the author does. Hopefully it continues on an upward trend. :)