X3nr0x_Starfield
Very good story so far, I have stopped because I need to sleep but The grammar is excellent I have seen very few errors and the personality of the MC is not like other protagonists in fan fiction he is a very rare kind of protagonist. This is one of the very few fanfics without a Harem and I am very grateful for that, The story development is really staying in one place right about now but It may get better in the future who knows. I'd rate this story a 4.5!