Reviews of Demon with subordinates

hello, everyone I want to seriously write this book. for anyone in the future that reads this I would love a review or at least a comment on how you felt reading this book. even though I hate it I will take the bad with stride and revel in the good. thank you in advance and happy reading.

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.