lynerparel
Amazing story at all. A fresh idea, a lot of funny moments, some pathos, living characters of those you want to know what they gonna do next, pretty fantasy world that reminds me old games I used to play long ago, and turns of plot you never expect. Very cool. Although, it was time with no updates, every new chapter deserves to be awaited. Keep writing, author, the future is yours.
This is good , probably have good future . But there arr something that kind of bothering me . I feel like the way of displaying character's development is still clumsily written . Then I still have a difficulty liking this Lara character even tho she is still newly introduced for some reasons (my personal feeling XD) . Some of scenes are cliches . Hope in the future will use lesser cliche scenes . I hope next chapters are getting better , still enjoyable . And still giving 5 stars . I'm sorry i want to express and point out some things but i am unable to express it well cause lack of english writing hehe
Though the update speed does not get the 5 stars I understand bc the author is writing two novels at the same time. That aside, this novel and writing is ****** astounding! It’s completely a breath of fresh air! The writing is so smooth and well paced that is hypnotic. Character development and world building is paced perfectly with how much of the worlds been introduced to us and the main characters. Over all this has been so far one the works I am looking forward to. Keep up the great work author!