StumblingtoSuccess
I will go out of my awkwardness and inferiority complex and say this, this book deserves my 5 star. I believe I will be able to captivate many people's heart. The starting journey of this book might feel slow to some people, I hope you can stick to it. Also, I will say in terms of writing skill, I might be the worst author in WN but I can say with a little belief my story telling capability isn't. And, last thing, Enjoy!
Are you looking for a cold-hearted Main Character but gentle in front of her daughter? A supposed slice of life but with an interesting twist? A reincarnation in another world and reconciliation with her daughter? Come and read, and find out how Max would deal the problem of becoming a demon while her daughter is the future hero!
Sooo I can say that I like how the story starts. We get a few chapters that show Max our MC and his beloved daughter Ana in modern day, their previous life. I especially like what the MC plan for the organization he's quiting. The writing is neat and easy to understand. I really hope the author can make it big with this story. We'll see how our MC gets stronger with the system All the best author!
TLDR: You should read this. Similair vibes as Custom Made Demon King but this book is all original - which to be clear is something good! (CMDK is pretty much a fan fic). So far it seems like the author has really put alot of thought into how the story will progress. The world seems very well thoughtout and a wide cast of characters has been introduced/foreshadowed. I am especially happy to see that the author uses time skips instead of filler to get through periods in which not much is going on. Keep up the good work!
This story starts with a happy but also sad part and then blast off into a world of adventure and determination. The MC is very well written along with his relationships with other characters. There are some discrepancies in the writing i.e. missing a word here and there, sometimes spellcheck puts down a word that doesnât fit the sentence but it does not make it difficult to read. Overall Iâm happy I found this book and hope to keep reading it to the end.
This is a nice story. The plot of the story is interesting, I have no complaints about it. The plot of trying to kill a God to be with the mc's daughter is similar to the cliche of an mc trying to save/reunite with a love interest which I think is overused or maybe the ones with that cliche performed it badly but for this story I don't mind it. But, there are some problems like Grammer, where I'm confused at some parts. Another problem is that the mc doesn't seem to act like a middle-aged man and an assassin. He is an assassin but acts like a swordsman going head to head with his opponents. apart from the problems I said, this novel is a good one to read.
Tapir Region of the Mystralyn Continent:- (Ch.-51 Reveal Cultivation Level of Vitality Realm and Magic Realm) Vitality Realm:- 1. Health Seeker Realm, 2. Fleshcrafting Realm, 3. Physique Refinement Realm, 4. Bloodline Strengthening Realm. 5.---- Magic Realm:- 1. Apprentice Realm, 2. Novice Realm, 3. Adept Realm, 4. Master Realm. 5.----