Rayne_Rue
Quite a delicious work to read. The first-person narrative allows you to connect and understand the emotions and feelings of Emma in quite a smooth way, combined with effective descriptions and thought sequences. It's engaging to follow her and her ex and best friend, creating an entertaining love triangle not lacking a little bit in spice. Recommended! It's like reading the diary of a person close to you. Sweet yet you almost feel as if you're voyeuring something you should not (in a good way). The short chapters help too with the pacing. Keep up the good work, Author!
Awe I feel for Emma, but her ex was an absolute tool anyways. 🙄 His friend, Jason, on the other hand… 😏 This story just grips you and forces you to read on to know what happens next. Before I knew it I was deep in chapter 6 lol 😅 Overall the story is very interesting, I look forward to more chapters! Keep it up!
It was a good read for me. I was curious from the beginning about how Emma's fate is going to change. I could easily understand and feel her emotions through the vivid descriptions. Her naive and genuine character made me more interested in the novel and now I want her to have a happy life. I've added this to my library and will make sure to read more! Keep up the good work author! I wish you the best of luck!
I just want to say the new book cover is beautiful 🥰. With this story, the author shows their creativity and good story telling ability 🤩🤩. Though this is a very cute and enjoyable story to read, there are some errors that hindered my ability to continue. I occasionally had to reread over the run on sentences and the dialogue— since the tags are included in the parentheses. Because of these grammatical choices, I was just a bit confused while reading 😅. But nonetheless, this is a really captivating story. Every writer has their own style, and writing rules, well, are they really necessary when writing fiction? Great job author on this piece. I hope Emma has a happy ending or my heart might not be able to take it 😓. Amazing work 🌸✨!!!
It is a nice and interesting story. I like the Emir guy since he knows his real feelings unlike some other male leads out there. I also like how Emma's break-up process is portrayed and the amnesia plot gave her romance with her partner a clean slate. Its kinda nice to compare how a grieving person and a 'semi-new person would react to the same guy. The moment when amnesiac Emma and original Emma would piece together is also a thing to look forward to. Its a good read overall but there something that needs to be done with the writing mistakes and random mishaps that break your concentration. Perhaps a proofreader or Grammarly would do.
Alright, so far so good. I think you can improve on the writing but it's not something that can be learned in one go and the only efficient way to learn it is to be curious and keep writing. I'm not into romance so I can't exactly review this the way a romance reader would. But according to what I read, I think you're doing just fine. Keep up the good work, author.
The story moves at a fairly decent pace, it doesn't feel like things stop for too long in one place unnecessarily. Chapters are a nice and conveniently short length to read. Development of characters feels fine, with their backgrounds and motivations stated to us as the reader. One criticism I have is the quality of the punctuation and grammar. Sometimes sentences run on for too long and sometimes punctuation is in the wrong spots, which really detracts from the overall quality. If this was fixed then I think it would drastically improve
This is not the first romance novel I've read on this site, and likely won't be the last. It's not the best and it's not the worst, and despite how that sounds, it's quite the compliment. The plot is fine. Basic, but fine. Looking at the characters, I don't really have much to say about them. However, I don't like the love triangle. Emir is creepy, and Jason is boring to read about. Emma does not stand out as a protagonist in any way. I also have to talk about the writing quality. It's... not good. Spacing is all over the place, and there are several occasions where entire words are missing from sentences. Grammar is poor, but I was at least able to figure out what was going on, which is a huge plus in comparison to many other novels that I've read. But despite all the stuff I've said, why's the score so high? Easy. While Emir is creepy, he's more engaging to read than many other protagonists from other books. More importantly, I was minorly invested while reading. I would however suggest running your chapters through Grammarly, or Wordcounter.net. It would make reading them significantly easier, and solve a large part of my issues with this book. 3.0/5-Not great, but it could be much worse.