I'm not usually one to read vampire stories, but seeing things from a Nepalese point of view intrigues me. The pacing is a little odd for the first few chapters, but overall the story has a nice mystery angle. Only critique, maybe provide a few more details as to what the MC and her best friend look like in their introductions. I think it's going to be interesting to see how this story will progress. Keep up the good work, Mr. Author and you'll do great things.
The world this writer has painted in the synopsis of this book is irresistibly intriguing. It is so definite, às I can see where the story leàds, and I would not want to miss any sequence.. Deception is caught my attention and the impression in my heart, truly I can't mention. This is indeed a great masterpiece. Keep it up.