Death Guns In Another World

Nice book

Amazing story! But if I’m being honest… the writing quality is not that great, I really think u should hire an editor. This would be so good and I bet a lot more people would read it if it wasnt difficult to read. It’s not the hardest thing to read but it definitely makes it a rough novel. Hiring an editor would make it much smoother. I understand English isn’t your first language and that’s totally okay! Hire an editor, or don’t! Completely up to you. But the novel would instantly become soooo much better if the writing was smoothed out.

is the mc op ?

what a story the characters are so good in this story and the writer did a fantastic job and every character is so good in this story to keep it up I would love to be your reader

So far I love this story It's to the point that I caught up in a matter of 2 weeks binge reading I put most of the other novels I was reading on hold cause I was so into it. I like everything about the story the author did a great job the only negative thing I have to say about it is some of the translations don't make much sense in English but it's no where near as bad as some of the other novels that have bad translation. it's almost like some parts are just rushed a little and he made a mistakes like for example mixing up the 3rd princess and 2nd princess several times or mixing up certain characters names in certain situations. I want to be clear though so the author doesn't think this a negative review cause it's not I'm just saying the only bad part about the story so far to help improve it. I look forward to the coming chapters and I will continue to support the novel with GT and soul stones as much as possible thank you😁

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The story is interesting and entertaining. However the writing quality and the grammar are a huge let down. If this story could be edited by someone who’s first language is English this story would be a solid 4.5/5

Novel's great, character progression is good. There are few fillers so story rarely gets boring. The best part would be the calculative environment where u get to understand 'read between the lines'.Most authors are not able to accomplish this. The biggest problem is the grammar and the worst part is the sentences are sometimes too faulty. How can you not understand the difference between 'have' and 'have not', can and cannot. Similarly there are way too many mistakes which makes the entire sentence go haywire. A person on the verge of death saying " i will live " and "i will leave" potray completely different meaning dude. Get your novel proofed before publishing. Apart from that a superb novel

solid choice for a beginner novel............... so please leave good review if you like IT..............anonymous_dum over and out........

it's good ............. ......... .......... .......... . . .. ......

One of the amazing stories i have read until now.good storyline,full enjoyment.The book has very promissing future.so have a try at it.I am sure you are gonna love it...

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This is a very good book .The characters are exciting and the storyline is marvelous .i can't wait to read this book till the very end .😍😍

man. the mc got to level 20 in 70+ episodes while others are at that level by chapters near 40. why author?? i have seen just the chapter names but I think mc is lacking in levelling part in my opinion. it isn't that speed of a levelling but a constant paced one. you could give this one a try.

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