melonball
This story is extremely well written, the smut scenes are short but sweet, and there seems to be a real focus on the plot which is uncommon for a ero-novel on this site. Although the chapters are short and the main character is a bit of a nihilist, I can already tell this book is going to be a good one.
its only good because of the smut scene but the actual story is kinda trash and if youre masochist you might like it, and the god in here or the higher ups(e.g author) is a masochist, the mc wants to die and didnt want to reincarnate but because of the higher ups and he's an M he made the mc pseudo immortal but can still feel the pain and suffering for all time
Just one word - Amazing! I had always been searching for a good ero book, which are quite rare here and I finally found another one. I am impressed with how well structured and smooth the writing is. The English is very good as well, with no obvious grammar errors, which is very rare with original Ero books. The Ero scenes are also very good and can easily excite the reader. And it's not just going to the brothel and stuff, the 18+ scenes are diverse and very interesting. Plus, this story also has some plots focusing on non-erotic stuff and gives equal importance to the fantasy world's exploration. If the author keeps with the quality and release rate, this story is bound to a big hit. If you are someone who enjoys Ero books, what are you waiting for? Go read this now!
The first 22 Chapters show a surprising writing quality that is rather uncommon for ero-novels. And the good quality doesn't end with the writing quality, even the story and background seem to be well thought trough. I hope this develops into a great fantasy novel with lots ***-scenes in between the story. I hate novels where the Mc seemingly doesn't have any libido at all... Great work so far Mr. Author!!!
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