drimar44
The synopsis hooked me right it. If you notice, it is one drawn-out sentence that almost crescendos in suspense. The text is deep until we learn that we will be following someone known as the Daughter of Zor. The Prologue was well-written. I love mythology and gods and the opposing Under/Upperworlds. I an excited for the change in POVs. Great work!
Disclaimer: This is a honest review. I have read all chapters (Chapter 6/posted chapter 8) in this story and I like the plot of the story, however there are a few suggestions I would like to inform the author: - some paragraphs tend to be very long and may prove stressful to read for app users. - some sentences are lengthy, as well. Good points: Simplicity of words, easy to understand and good introduction of characters. Noticed that there isn't a lot of vulgar language in the story, which I like. I'll be sticking around to read more. Some sentences are missing a "." at the end but easily fixed. In overall, I like the idea of a 'magical world' and academy life.
Wow, finally wrote a review. The synopsis is lit, the introduction is really goosebumps inducing. The return of the daughter of zod, the way the sentence was written made it look so epic. The content is nice, so to sum it up is that this is a nice book to add to your collection of books. The story is nice and well written.
This is a highly recommended one! I love suspense and this is simply the best! The way the chapters have been penned down is commendable. I really like the narration, it's making me to keep reading further.... However the prologue, which was well written by the way, was still a bit confusing for me. But the very 1st chapter got me hooked. I have saved it and will keep reading. Cheers to the author!