chapter 3 (home work need to rewrite)(fixing grammar)

Author here hmm i have idea to make my story better but it need time to do it because i will using an app.

so i will update the chapter every 2 days before 16 June and after it will be weekly yep.

i don't know if this make it better or not but i believe it will make it better, and enjoy this chapter....(this chapter still not using an app but next chapter is)

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i'm just fixing the grammar. still not done rewriting. and this is done by AI so i'm still not finished editing yet

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{Timeline XX1 16 02}

Once upon a time, in a small village, there lived a young boy. He trained as if there were no tomorrow, but the thing is, he was just warming up—okay, it's a bit weird, but bear with me.

*SLASH X5

"Huff... there are four more," he said, looking around. He found himself surrounded by goblins.

In a quick response, the boy cast a spell on his sword, assuming a fighting stance. He tightened his grip on the sword handle with his right hand, pulling it back towards his waist and pointing it at the enemy in front of him. His left hand took a palm position, pointing towards the enemy. "WIND MAGIC: DEATH THRUST!" With a swift movement, his body flickered and reappeared several meters away from the enemy. He stopped the movement of his left foot, stepped his right foot forward, and stomped it on the ground, creating a small crack. This caused his upper body to spin 180 degrees, using the power from his hips and waist to make the movement stronger. In the middle of the spin, his right hand, gripping the sword pointed at the enemy, moved rapidly, supported by his shoulder and elbow. He spun his hand, creating a small tornado around his sword. Finally, he straightened his right arm, placed his left hand on his waist in a fist form, and the small tornado expanded to a three-meter diameter. The tornado pointed towards the enemy, leaving them unable to react. Every time the tornado touched something, it cut through everything in its path with a length of twelve meters.

*KRIIEEKKK

*KRI-UGH

*SLAM *BAM

*SLASH x??

"Heh, weak," the boy declared after destroying everything in front of him.

"Bell, what are you doing?" a voice came from behind him.

"Hmm? Grandpa, I'm done warming up. Now I need to find something stronger than kobolds or goblins," the boy replied, while touching his cheeks.

"What's with this boy? That move probably has as much magical power as a Level 3 adventurer," Grandpa remarked.

"What I'm saying is, please consider your surroundings. Look at all the mess you've made. See the destructive power you possess. Sigh, who am I kidding? Just please restrain your strength when facing enemies weaker than you," Zeus, unable to be mad at his grandson again, as he had to meet someone he didn't want to meet the next day, reluctantly advised.

"Hmm, okay, I understand. So, what about my training?" Bell asked.

"Your training with the sword is good enough, and you're getting better at combining your magic with it. However, your current sword can't handle your power and..." Zeus paused, looking at Bell's sword.

"That sword will probably get destroyed if you use that technique or a similar one three or four more times. For now, take this technique. It's my own sword technique that I developed with a friend," Zeus said, handing the technique to Bell.

"Thunder Breathing Technique?" Bell raised an eyebrow.

"Yes, with that—" Zeus began, but Bell interrupted.

"But I use wind magic. I can't use thunder magic," Bell pointed out.

"Well, I don't know about that, but it's in our bloodline, so you'll likely have it. Don't worry, this technique doesn't require magic. What you need to do is follow the instructions in this book. Once you finish your magic training, you can master all seven forms," Zeus explained.

"Alright, I'll do it. Hehe," Bell replied with a cheeky smile.

"Good. For now, let's finish your training early. Tomorrow, we will visit your grandma," Zeus said.

"But I want to learn this technique," Bell said, sounding disappointed.

"You can learn it when we get home. Come on," Zeus couldn't refuse his grandson's wish when he saw how sad he looked.

"Yay, let's go!" Bell exclaimed.

"Thunder breathing is fast and really suitable for my agility type, but if I'm not mistaken, there's a secret in the first form of thunder breathing," Bell thought as he went home with his grandpa.

"Wish me luck, Bell. That witch will never let me escape, especially after the letter she sent me. It really scared me," Zeus thought, remembering the letter he sent and the reply he received a week later.

{Flashback}

[to Zeus,

Bla-bla-------------------------

I accept that my grandson will be my student, but on one condition: you cannot set foot in my house. Bring my grandson to me, and then leave. If I see you after that day or before I send you a letter stating, "My grandson has completed his magic studies," say goodbye to your rod. Don't worry about Bell; I will take better care of him than you ever could.

-Hera]

{Back to where they head home}

"Alright, Bell, please get your backpack ready for your stay at your grandma's. I won't be with you because I have something important to do," Zeus said.

Bell looked at his grandpa and nodded.

"Maybe Hera scared Zeus into not being able to live with her," Bell thought.

"Tomorrow, I will take you there, and once your studies are over, we'll come back together. Until then, I'll find a bow teacher for you."

"Don't work too hard now. We'll leave tomorrow morning," Bell replied, continuing to read.

"System, show me my status," Bell commanded.

[PROCESS...]

[NAME: BELL CRANEL

AGE: 12

YUNO TEMPLATE: 15% (30% SEALED)

STATS (CANNOT SHOW DUE TO HOST NOT HAVING FALNA)

SKILLS/ABILITIES:

(GUITAR AND PIANO INSTRUMENT), (LOVED BY MANA), (COOKING), (SWORDPLAY), (WIND MAGIC), (THE LUCKY ONE), (DAGGER MASTERY), [CLICK FOR MORE]]

"It's stuck at 15%, and it never increases anymore. Maybe if I learn more magic, it will rise," Bell thought to himself.

Bell stood up and walked towards his room.

"I need to get ready," he said, standing in front of his wardrobe.

After packing his bag, Bell was now ready for the journey tomorrow.

"Hmm, should I bring my guitar? But how should I bring it—"

"Ah, I have Grandpa. Hehe, why am I worrying? Let's go to sleep," Bell said, heading to his bed.

{The next day}

Zeus and Bell walked outside their village towards Hera's house in another village. Bell had his backpack, which was suitable for a fourteen-year-old, while Zeus carried most of the supplies.

"Grandpa, how long will it take to get to Grandma's house?" Bell asked.

"About four hours of walking," Zeus answered.

"Can't we use a carriage?" Bell asked again.

"No, the village doesn't have access to one," Zeus replied with a sigh.

They continued their walk towards Hera's house. They encountered few goblins and kobolds along the way. Whenever they encountered one or two, Bell swiftly dispatched them. After three hours of walking, Bell groaned, "Grandpa, why don't we take a rest? My legs are tired."

"Don't joke around. Let's keep going," Zeus replied.

"Tch, I just want to learn this breathing technique," Bell thought.

"Grandpa, do you often visit Grandma?" Bell asked.

"If I do, your grandma will make me sleep outside the house," Zeus deadpanned.

Bell nodded.

At Hera's house, a gift from one of her familia, a beautiful woman, the goddess Hera, hummed in the kitchen as she prepared food. She wore a smile on her face, capable of charming any man who laid eyes on her. Suddenly, she heard a knock on the door.

*KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

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{ORIGINAL}

Chapter 3

{timeline XX1 16 02}

Once upon a time in small village there lives one boy. Training like there is no tomorrow but the thing is he is just warming up-{ okay its weird actually. Just bear with it.}

*SLASH X5

"huff.. there 4 more". Looking around him. He is surrounded by goblins.

In fast response the boy casting his magic to his sword. He is now making his stance. His grip on his sword handle get tighter on his right hand and pull his right hand to hi back pointing his sword to the enemy in front his eyes. His left hand get in palm position pointing at the enemy. " WIND MAGIC : DEATH THRUST". With his movement his body flickered and appear several meters from the enemy. Stopping his left feet movement his right feet step in front of the left feet then stomp the feet on the ground creating small crack. It cause the upper body spin 180 degree. With some power that his hips and waist movement to support the movement to be stronger. In the middle of the spin, his right hand grip who has the sword pointing to enemy move fast with the support the shoulder and elbow. Then he spin his hand. With that combine this make around his sword causing small tornado. Then finishing the movement by straighten the right arm and his left hand on his waist with fist form. The small tornado become bigger by 1 meter the lastly become 3 meter diameter. With point of tornado to the enemy. Causing the enemy cannot react. Every time the tornado touch something it cut every thing in his way with 12 meter long.

*KRIIEEKKK

*KRI-UGH

*SLAM *BAM

*SLASH x??

"HEH weak". The boy who have been destroy anything on his front said.

"BELLL WHAT ARE YOU DOING". A sound coming from his back

"hmm? Grandpa, I'm finished warmup now I need to find some thing stronger than kabold or goblin". The boy said this while he touching his checks.

'what with this boy. That move probably has same magic power as much as lever 3 adventure'. Grandpa said that.

" what I'm saying is please CONSIDER!! YOUR! SURROUNDING. SEE ALL YOUR MESS THAT YOU MAKE. LOOK AT THIS DESTRUCTIVE POWER. Sigh who I'm kidding. Just please hold your strength if you against an enemy that weaker than you". Zeus who is cannot mad again at his grandson because tomorrow he will meet some one that he doesn't want to meet. He also has bad feeling about this.

"hmm. Okie dokie, so about my training?"

"about your training with sword is good enough that you can combine your magic better with the sword but the sword cannot handle your power and..". Zeus look at his Grandson sword

"that sword probably will get destroyed if you use that technique or the same level technique, 3 or 4 times again. So for now here have this technique, is my technique sword movement I develop it with my friend."

Zeus hand the Technique to Bell.

"Thunder Breathing Technique?". Bell raise one his eyes brows.

"yes. With tha-". Zeus want to say something but Bell Interrupt.

"but I use wind I can't use thunder magic". Bell said this.

"well I don't know about that but you sure will have it because is in our bloodline. So don't worry and also this technique doesn't require magic what you need is follow the instructor of this book. So you need to master all the 7 forms after you finished training your magic." Zeus said.

"will do hehe". Bell said with cheeky smile.

"good. For now lets finish your training early. tomorrow we will meet your grandma." Zeus said.

"but I want to learn this technique". Bell said with sad tone

"you can learn it when we got home come on". Zeus who saw his grandson sad can't refuse his wish.

"YEAY LETS GO". Bell said this.

' Thunder breathing is fast and really suitable for me that agility type but if I'm not wrong there is a secret in thunder breathing first form.' Bell thought goes home with his grandpa.

'wish me luck Bell, That witch will never let me escape just as the letter she send me really make me scared.' Zeus thought remember the letter that he send and get her reply after a week.

{flashback}

[to Zeus

Bla-bla-------------------------

I accept about my grandson to be my student but in one condition you can't place your foot in my house. so after you bring my grandson to me at my house. Leave and if I still saw you after that day or before I sent letter to you that contain 'my grandson is finished his study about magic'. If not say bye bye to your rod. Also don't worry about Bell I will take care of him better than you.

-Hera]

{back to where two back home}

"Alright Bell please get ready your backpack to stay at your grandma and I cannot be with you cause I have some important thing to do." Zeus said

Bell see his grandpa and nod

'maybe Hera make Zeus scared that he cannot lives together with her'. Bell thought.

"tomorrow I will send you there with me until your study over. Until then I will found a bow teacher for you."

"Don't work to hard now. We will leave tomorrow morning"

Bell who is reading just give him a nod.

'system show me my status'

[PROCESS…]

[NAME : BELL CRANEL

AGE : 12

YUNO TEMPLATE : 15% ( 30% SEALED)

STATS (CANNOT SHOW DUE TO HOST DOESN'T HAVE FALNA)

SKILL/ABILITY

(GUITAR AND PIANO INSTRUMENT), (THE ONE WHO LOVED BY MANA), (COOKS),( SWORD PLAY), (WIND MAGIC), ( THE LUCKY ONE),( DAGGER MASTERY), [CLICK FOR MORE] ]

'15% and it never increase again. Maybe if I learned magic more it can rise more.' Bel l thought

Bell stand up and walk to his room

"I need to get ready." Bell said in front wardrobe.

Packing his bag Bell now ready to go for tomorrow.

" hmm should bring my guitar? But how should bring this-"

"ah I have grandpa. Hehe what I'm worry about lets sleep" Bell goes to his bed.

{tomorrow}

Zeus and Bell who is walk outside their village going to Zeus wife house in another village. Bell now have his backpack that fit for 14 years old and his side Zeus carrying most of the stuff.

"Grandpa how long it gonna take to grandma house?" Bell asked

" About 4 hour of walking " Zeus Answer Bell question.

" can we use carriage?' Bell ask again

" We can't the village don't have access for it." Zeus

*sigh

They now walk to Hera's house. Goblins and kabolds rarely come on their way. If they counter one or two Bell would kill them immediately . It have been 3 hour of walking. "grandpa why don't we rest I can't feel my leg" Bell groaned. " don't joke around lets go." Zeus

" tch" ' I just want to learn this breathing technique' Bell thought

"grandpa do you often visit grandma?" Bell

"if I do that your grandma will let me sleep outside the house" Zeus deadpanned

Bell nodded

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House of Hera. This house is a gift from one of her familia. A beautiful women now inside the kitchen humming around because her grandson will visit her. She have smile on her face that can charm every man if they saw it. The beautiful women name Hera a goddess prepare some food when she heard a sound.

*KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK