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Danmachi: The Elemental Swordsman

Author: Jack_Ofharts
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What is Danmachi: The Elemental Swordsman

Read Danmachi: The Elemental Swordsman fanfiction written by the author Jack_Ofharts on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Anime & Comics fanfic stories, covering action, adventure, reincarnation, system, comedy. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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Ah... It seems that I have reincarnated... well... okay then. The dance of the fire god... huh... so Demon Slayer? Judging from that giant tower reaching up to the sky... I doubt it... \You don't need to eat, sleep or even breathe, though that last one is needed for the swordsmanship... have a sword and good luck.\ ... This random note must be saying the truth... ---- I own nothing. Not even the writing style, im trying to write like my friend and will be asking him for some pointers... So... don't tell me that im copying him, im basically writing this with him. I won't tell you who he is though : )

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I'm sorry author but seriously? I can understand the updating stability but the others.. I can't rate higher than 3 stars.. I can assume that you are a new author right? So here's some criticism about your story. For the writing quality is decent however you rushed a lot of things in the chapters.. Because of that the writing quality was lowered to 3. the story development is also pretty bad.. only because you seemed to cram a lot of things and didn't bother to spread it out to multiple chapters.. It is also because you didn't even bother to try to write what he experienced in the dungeon.. Due to that it just feels like we're viewing nobody except Loki.. Because of that I had lower it to 2.. the character design also has some issues.. Like how his personality changed suddenly.. And because we haven't experienced his point of view it just feels like his character is so bland... because we haven't seen his weaknesses, troubles, backstory, and strengths.. so I rated it a 3. for the updating stability I'll rate it as 4 because it's still new so meh.. and for the world background.. I'm sorry but it's 2 stars for me... Because there's so many details you haven't given a explanation.. Like how did he went to danmachi? Why does Loki want him so bad? What was his POV in the dungeon etc...

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