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I would like to write that this is my first such production and the first in general and that grammar etc because I'm an idiot and English is not my language [] i dialogue " " i thinking ________________________________________________________________

[but this new season is awesome] said a boy with raven black hair and blue eyes

[Okay I have to buy something to eat and drink] he said getting out of bed heading towards the door

moments later he was wearing a black and white hoodie with black tracksuits and black shoes

[okay just wallet and keys and we're going to the store] he said to himself

he had to cross a bridge on his way to the store

'crack'

when he was in the middle of the bridge, he heard a crack

"!!!"

The boy looked around noticing the crack [oh fuck] he said as he started running to the other end of the bridge

as he ran he began to hear more cracks as he turned to see what was going on he saw the bridge collapsing

[fuck, if I knew this was going to happen, I'd at least write a farewell letter] he said running to the stairs downstairs

[it's close and i'll survive] he said as he was about to walk down the stairs

'crack' 'crack'

looking down he saw 2 cracks under him "shit" he thought as he fell down the stairs

ugh!!

[fuck!!! I can't move my leg] he said as he fell one flight of stairs

[fuck my luck fucks me on every side] he said as he fell together with the rubble to the base of the bridge

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we see in a white room a raven black boy with blue eyes slowly getting up from what looks like a bed [fuck my head] said [where am I?] said the stunned boy

[you died] said the silhouette next to him the boy

turned towards the sound and saw a person with white hair and a beard with green eyes

[did I die? actually i was always curious if there are any gods,reincarnation,etc] the boy said

sarcastically

[yes and you are right there are gods and reincarnation] said the silhouette

[can I reincarnate, for example, in another world] said the boy with stars in his eyes

[yes without prolonging what you think will reincarnate you in another world] said the silhouette with a small smile

[oh could I choose which world to go to?] said the boy

[yes, and you can choose your power too] said the silhouette

[ok, can I choose now?] asked the boy

[you can] answered the silhouette

[this world of my choice is danmachi] said the boy

[and power?] asked the silhouette

[let me think ok i choose the power of sung jin-woo with solo leveling and i want to start with a system like him] said the boy

[good so you want monarchs and rulers to be in danmachi] said silhouette

[yes, but I don't want the gods to know about rulers and monarchs] answered the boy

[good last name what you want] said the silhouette

[Rey Crawford] rey replied

[okay, have a nice adventure] answered the silhouette