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I read till 118 chapterd and thought to give my opinion. The world building is good and MC power growth is quite unique. But, there are several drawbacks that make this book very mid level: ⢠One MC who wants to live forever lonely whitout trying to gain any influence in the world. There is no real motivation for him to trying to live forever he was afraid of death. (To Author just wanted to ask what MC will do once he achieve immotality lock himself in a room and sleep. Here you could have made MC the Immortal Emporer of Human Race or something. But you chose not to and wasted the potential to turn this novel into kingdom building novel) ⢠Next almost all are chatecters are one dimensional and they are only trying to backstab one another with zero motivations and character growth. (Here in this book it's just comical how bad the one dimensional characters are just let me give you an example Rose she just comes to MC for his help in one expedition and before he even agrees to join the expedition she reveles the secret of expedition and later regrets it and try to kill him by sending assains on his teail đŽâđ¨đŽâđ¨) ⢠And finally the main drawback is there is no fun or excitement in reading this book it felt tedious. I did not even felt one WOW! or Oh Cool! factor while reading this book that is why this book is not widely recognized. This book has great potential but Author wasted it. Author need to read someother top books in this platform before he starts writing.
Iâve only read to around 37 then stopped donât remember why but the writing isnât the best but not the worst Iâve read but it is pretty stupid that he can live forever so early on we donât see him struggling or do evil things and thatâs all I remember so I say if your bored and want to read about and Evil Mc might as well give this one a try.
This novel is by far the best that Iâve read, in the past couple months. The information isnât to overwhelming, the characters all have backrounds that explain why they do what they do. Along with their being a lot of details about the world. I liked the original power rankings, but the new ones are cool to. Overall I wouldâve loved to give it a 5 star rating but it does have a grammar mistakes. But not like some other novels where you canât even focus because their so overwhelming. Great job author, and I canât wait for the next chapters.
Excellent novel, I thoroughly enjoyed this one. The main character is very cunning and calculating. His power is op and interesting. I really liked the combination of magic and technology in the world he was reincarnated in. There's not many if any cliche or overly annoying things. He doesn't make many mistakes and the ones he does are reasonable, not something stupid that could have easily been avoided. Read to ch477
Man after reading all those books in webnovel I only found this and other 2 books to be the only ones to deliver what they promised. I just love the concept and constant challenges and power ups never gets me bored instead I need more. Author if are reading this I just love this book keep up this coming and don't stop but we need more chapters. Thank you
only one word to describe it ,it is the best I am going to die because there are no more chapters to read I am all caught up .I can't even sleep peacefully and only thinking what happens further in the story .hey author post 50 chapters a day atleast , don't force me to kidnap you and then forcing you to write in a bunker somewhere.